Hello all, this is my first translation. Hope you guys enjoy.

fixed pages 3 and 16, thanks aleden.

https://spiderexperttranslations.blogspot.com/

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Thicc satorin is a miracle.

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Damn that was hot. Blowjob on the toilet with an explosive facial, oh yeah, that's the stuff.

Really good for your first translation. Looks like a fairly annoying one to edit/clean, so really good job on that front. Only really noticed two real errors, which were: on Pg.3 there's a "your'e" that should be "you're". On Pg.16 "such an obsence oder" not sure what you meant to type here, other than 'such an obscene odor' (or odour, if that's your preference). Other than that, seriously, good job! Thank you for your hard work!

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Thanks for the feedback. I'll fix those pages as soon as I can.

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Three times, I've cum to this lewd book three times in the last couple hours and I remain unable to make it past page 20. What demon drew something so heinous?

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很好看，求汉化。

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Those face POV shots are great

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SpiderExpert, I've sent you a message on the E-Hentai forums. I hope you'll consider my invitation!

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Damn what passion on these scenes, godlike work.

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This is a masterpiece.

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good job bb

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