Oh Lord, the art in this is so adorable. Nobi captured the characters so well! Madoka's actions and expressions throughout the whole book look so genuine and authentic, in no small part due to the great artstyle. Speaking of authentic, the school scenes and Madoka talking to her friends all seemed really authentic as well. It can be hard for people to write dialogue between teenaged girls, but it felt spot on here. The way Madoka was worrying about her weight seemed tempered really well too, wasn't over the top of typical cliche 'gotta watch my weight lol!'
The close-up of her face after she has a bit of the candy Homura gives her was so adorable, my heart melted. Great little doujinshi, thanks for the upload!
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