Thanks for the upload, but you seriously need to use a different font (not Comic Sans, please) and center text in bubbles. Not to mention leveling pages, this gallery file size is 4x what it needs to be; all the excess is spent in faithfully reproducing the grain of the paper the manga was originally printed on...
An advice for those who want to edit a manga: You don't have to figure out everything for yourself. There were persons before you and some left their knowlege on the internet. Check the "Cove of Scanlators" on the e-hentai forums or use google, bing, startpage,... and search for them (e.g. typesetting tutorial, editing manga,...).