Posted on 11 September 2018, 11:20 by: DarkShadow6
Score +12
I mean the first two words of the title are on point. this could really use better editing and a cleaner medium. the dirty paper scan, awkward anatomy, bad grammar, poor framing, and lack of perspective—the artist has a lot of potential but these things hold it back. like, why add digital speech bubbles if you aren't going to digitally ink it, or at least clean the backgrounds??