What happens when somebody tells you your sister is going to be sold at a black market slave auction. You have to go and save her right? That's what happened to Jack.

I'd prefer to rewatch "Taken."

Base +14, KazeZeroL -5, jfragrettel +8, somercet +9

Haven't a clue about the plot but those are some great models. Why doesn't he still understand "you're" yet though??

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Poor punctuation. C'mon, Bill. I can't believe after all this time you still are having the same problem. Please.... At least use some periods so everything isn't a run-on sentence. Thank you.

Base +6, jfragrettel +8, Jin.H. +8, TheOneWhoScans +6, Smokeman99 +5, TheSPNCupcake -7

FYI I think he IS using periods. It's just that the font is not that great so it's hard to read. The relatively low res quality doesn't help. Anyways, I give this 5 stars simply because it's a departure from the somewhat common cheating wife with futa thing Bill tends to do. That gets tiring real quick.

Base +7, Jin.H. +8, electrocardia +6

There are a few misspellings I failed to catch. You're is a contraction for you are and your is possessive. I didn't even use 'you're' in this series. Which frame did I misuse you're? Let me know so I can refresh my English lessons.
There are periods in there. They are just hard to see with that font I'm using.

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well, where is the rest?

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Hey, Bill, I'm a fan of your work!
I'd like to know what fonts are you using
Thanks!

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so wonderful
nice pic

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Is there more to this, or no?

So...was she excited to go see her brother, or does she hate him & want half his money? You can't have it both ways.

Last edited on 29 September 2023, 20:41.

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