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English is not my first language, so if you see any error in any text please tell me how to write it correctly so I can fix it, thanks.

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Ladyhips huh...

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love the art work, totally gave me a boner

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So glad the series continue ^_^

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Awesome, thanks a lot :)

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Fuck, what a tease

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Where are these guys getting these female asses from?

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Why do people who aren't fluent in English keep trying to write comics in English?

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a rare shemale story that isn't a 3d abomination

hopefully the cute trap gets a boobjob like the megatit shemale

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This shemale is katrina from the 2 sides comic?

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It's not an issue about not speaking English, it's an issue of not having a proofreader. I've seen this artist for a while now, and they even have a patreaon, how can they not have anyone to translate this stuff proper? There's not even a paragraph of text in all of this stuff, I'd gladly do it for free since. Heck, you don't even need to actually speak Spanish to correct all of this stuff. I meself might try to contact the author at this point.

Last edited on 15 June 2018, 09:15.

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扶扶扶扶他?

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@thekiller2413: While I do see the flaws in the script here, offering to be a proofreader after misspelling "Patreon", using a comma instead of a semicolon in "....Patreon; how can...", ending the third sentence on "since" with nothing to follow it, and spelling "myself" as "meself" is a bit... how should I put it... hypocritical.

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@Lord Dashwood Oh, m'Lord Dashwood, you dig it deep! I was quite drunk when I wrote that, I must admit. I messed up the spelling of Patreon and I have no clue why I'd put "since" at the end of that sentence, besides the fact I had several others going on in my mind that overran each other. And I don't know anything about using semicolons! But I utterly object to your objection of the word "meself", since, as a non-native English speaker, it took me some years to learn how to type in a more natural way. Years of raw exposure to the internet and their denizens, can you fathom!? Sometimes writing an expression that is not entirely grammatically correct makes more sense, I believe.

Alas,I did not convey such information at first, but the truth is that I'm from Brazil and I have more than a passing understanding of Spanish. I can easily see what the author wanted to express in their native language and how it got so utterly botched in this translation. What I meant, and this was originally typed as an answer to a comment that has been buried, is that even if you don't understand the original language you can easily correct some of the mistakes there with a passing knowledge of English. You're right about the hypocritical remark though, since I have not contacted the author at all as I mentioned.

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Well, this is strangely hot

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imho a follow up with the father would have been a good place to end it storywise. Maybe he picks up his kid's porno, not knowing he's in it until he sees him...And then he decides to keep watching, and grabs some lube and tissue.

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Makes me wanna play with my dildo <3

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