Hello everyone, it's been fun so far creating these characters and toying with the program to see what can I do with it.

I've also been taking on consideration some of the comments in the previous chapter that should be applied in the third episode, like the more sex and less text thing, for example.

Anyway, thanks to everyone who liked the first chapter and hope you enjoy this one as well.

1st chapter here:
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Last edited on 19 October 2018, 04:08.

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It was good, I think it would be more enjoyable with longer sex scenes or at least more creative ones perhaps! Got real potential here! 4/5

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What software are you using for this? Blender? Maia? Poser?

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Really liked this one, hope you continue with this.

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@Sylvrwolflol that is the Japanese Game Honey Select from Illusion. Im Guessing Screenshot + Editing for Text

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Great job so far, love the super curvy body type you chose, it's so underappreciated! Hoping for some body swapping stuff in the future.

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Wonderful work man. I just downloaded HS 1.2 with the party dlc, but its all in Japanese and I dont think if mine has the features you do in ur uploads. Can you plz tell me what version/mods/dlc your using? Appreciated man

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Good work man. If I had any criticism it might be the magic penis stuff looks weird. i don't know if theres a better shape or effect for it or not but its just a weird shape. I hope our MC gets all kind of fucked and filled as a woman. Keep it up.

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@daodos Well, if they are machinimating this then it’s probably the best they can do outside of further editing in Photoshop or GIMP, but at that point you may as well just get actual 3D rendering software. Machinimation can be endearing in a similar fashion to stop-motion, but once you start getting to complex vfx it’s essentially shooting yourself in the foot. It’s hard when you’re using software for unintended purposes, and when the models could easily be ripped and imported into professional software that’s designed for the needs they’re lacking... one can only assume it’s either a familiarity thing or a money thing keeping them tied to the game software.

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This shit is great. Some A grade porn with the perfect balance between sex and story to keep it interesting. The character design is both interesting and alluring. The camera angles give you a great view of the scene and the dialog is not even cheesy. The only critique I'd have would be the magic penis. It looks not that good. I have seen other versions of Honey Select with a modular dick model but I dont know how viable an option that is in this case.

As for story considerations, I hope Rachel stays a girl and learns to enjoy her new life. In the long way down the line (no idea how long this is planned to go on) I'd love to see some MC pregnancy, nothing fetishised, just plain old child bearing and an (offscreen) birth, to really drive the relationship home.

Man, I put way to much thought into porn.

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