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I like that she didn't give up.

Page 3: "I just locked this shackles…." --> "I just locked these shackles..."
Page 3: "The desire to rule waht I like is the nature of human being. Isn't it?" --> "The desire to take what one wants is the nature of human beings, right?"
Page 4: "Were…." --> "Are…"
Page 4: "Were you a Girl?!" --> "You're a girl?!"
Page 4: "I think you were a boy because of your flat…." --> "I thought you were a boy because of your flat—"
Page 6: "You know waht…?" --> "You know what…?"
Page 6: "Commander was…." --> "Commander is…"
Page 6: "A girl?!!" --> "…a girl?!"
Page 7: "So, you give up?" --> "So, are you giving up?"
Page 7: "This is the news what I watched before…." --> "I recently saw the news…"
Page 7: "They said completed the experiment that make a child with combine ovum to ovum…." --> "Apparently, the experiment of creating a child from only two ova was successful…"

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i hope god have forsaken her

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