I close my eyes....... No no, that's it. I close my eyes, I'm not seeing this, you're not seeing this, we aren't doing this and this isn't happening. Move along.
Original commissioner and story-creator here. it's out of order: the fifth page is actually page n°1 (while sleeping he enter her dreams-realm and then do stuff)
Concerning the ending eh... I like semi-dark twsts sometimes. Bit inspired by a couple of feral story