This is my first translation I've done so it might not be good enough.

Ooooh! The first translated Juliet doujin!
Can't wait for the first rape-themed one~ <3

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holy crap. the art is almost spot-on

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Thanks for this, I have been waiting.

Hoping for some doujins of the princess and Romeo.

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doggy and footjob when?

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This cover almost looks like the original cover of the official series. Great job! *Almost gets misled thinking why the heck someone posted the original series in this website*

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i'm hoping the chinese twins to get their own H-doujinshi

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Could you please upload all pages in their original resolution and not just the pages you didn't touched.
It looks like you obviously know how download the full resolution pages, so I don't have to tell you how to do it. But you don't have to create the downscaled 1280 pages e-hentai uses for the galleries. e-hentai creates them for you during the the upload. (got this asked once)

The rest looks good. English and editing are way above cgrascal level, so if you upload in full res in the future you should be good.

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"probably making the bald man cry"

Okay, who got their Tyrion in my pornographic comic books?

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May this be the first of many!

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The art is disturbingly similar to the original I had to double check the artist

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I'm surprised he didn't pass out sooner.

Knowing Inuzuka this also probably happened on his wedding night with Juliet. To bad the actual author didn't bother to write it.

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