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(C94) [Himura Nyuugyou (Himura Kiseki)] Getsuyoubi no Tawawa Sono VI + α [English] [bdacosta2]

(C94) [比村乳業 (比村奇石)] 月曜日のたわわ そのVI+α [英訳]

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Posted:2018-11-27 09:31
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Language:English  TR
File Size:5.35 MiB
Length:10 pages
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Posted on 27 November 2018, 09:31 by:   bdacosta2    PM
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Since I don't see anyone else trying to translate this story, I'll give it the old college try. This is the first time I've translated a full story. How did I do?

Edit: Thank you for the critique. The last page has been revised. Translating the original dialogue directly would have been awkward, so I've used slightly different words that try to carry the same feeling.
Posted on 27 November 2018, 07:45 by:   kannushi    PM
Score +28
That last page ouch

Edit: Oh, that's much better. The original told me "You'll never be onii-san" which I thought was endearing in a hurtful way.
Last edited on 30 November 2018, 07:32.
Posted on 27 November 2018, 07:47 by:   Boris Glevrk    PM
Score +60
Uh, the original line of the last page was "oniisan.../that's you (the reader)".
Page 8 lower left, she's not talking about twins, she said "I'm just gonna give birth to like 2 babies in quick succession and then go back to collage".
Posted on 27 November 2018, 08:34 by:   Newprimus    PM
Score +52
Pretty much what boris says, but for last line she's not saying the reader is oniisan, but it's implied that it's oniisan who's behind the camera.
Posted on 27 November 2018, 11:16 by:   Reboot    PM
Score +7
Thank you very much for the translation.
Posted on 27 November 2018, 11:33 by:   nabusco    PM
Score +11
Damn 2 kids and back to college she has her goals already set
Posted on 27 November 2018, 11:43 by:   Boris Glevrk    PM
Score +11
@Newprimus Given the fact that the sign on lower left corner of the first panel of page 9 says "2 pages left" (notice it's page, so she and the sign bearer are both aware that this is a book), I think Ai-chan very much broke the 4th wall. That's why I'd say "oniisan behind the cam" is the same thing as "oniisan is the reader".
Posted on 27 November 2018, 14:26 by:   yutshu    PM
Score +5
noice my daily dose of glucose are fullfilled
Posted on 28 November 2018, 05:10 by:   JuggaloHomie    PM
Score +23
Was she talking about the guy she first met on the train at the beginning of this series? I always assumed they'd end up together.
Posted on 29 November 2018, 20:20 by:   ICUPP    PM
Score +1
Thanks for the translation :)
Posted on 09 December 2018, 04:19 by:   xchyk    PM
Score +7
You tried at least. Maybe keep a dictionary open next time.

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