Comic by KatSoone

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https://inkbunny.net/KitSoone

The art is is bad, but it shows off some skill as the forms are consistent, body placement and motions are clear. The only thing wrong about it seems to be the designs, it seems to be going to a very lithe form, which can work but the facial construction is throwing it off so much that it makes both bad to look at. The story and dialogue works but the pacing of it is very rough. But as soon as it hits page 29, the whole flow of the story that has already been set up collapses and all cohesion is lost.

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@Macto Per Furor - Fair enough if you don't quite like the art style. Personally I find it pretty cute and fun, all drawn very cleanly. Though I will say, I don't much like the colors of the brother very much on the cover, but the actual comic being all in grayscale kinda fixes that problem for me anyway.

And as far as the "story and dialogue", it's just a little brother-sister comic; I wouldn't read too much into there being a profound "story". I'll agree that in around 2 or 3 places the pacing seems a bit off, but it's not like it's impossible to keep up with. They're mainly just on that couch, after all.

Oh, and page 29: That's an April Fools page, as with page 30, hence the filenames. I put those at the end as to not be confusing (also labeling this gallery as "ongoing", so those "the ends" would be considered the jokes they were meant to be), but, in retrospect, maybe I shouldn't have included them to avoid that confusion altogether. I just thought they were kinda funny. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

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@Macto Per Furor: this comic's been very slowly coming together for eons and the last few pages of this gallery are April Fool's jokes from the last few years.

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Now waiting for their games to get hot and heavy.

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i’m just waiting for their games to get illustrated better lol

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