[Hal] Kono Natsu, Shoujo wa Bitch ni Naru. | This Summer, The Girl Turns Into a Bitch. (Holy Bitch!) [English] [progste]

Posted on 23 December 2018, 00:40 by: Mysael

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Raw scans provided by viacheslavovich.

Translation by progste.
Edited and commissioned by me
QCed by Axalon and Slobber

Well I was really dissatisfied with the translation of CGrascal and my previous work was from my beginnings and was therefore frankly perfectible. In the end all the chapters on which I previously worked except the one done by hennojin will come out in a new version. I will also take this opportunity to translate chapter three.

Happy reading to all.

If you have any correction, complaint, request, do not hesitate to contact me.

Update: new version re-edit with my current standards and Qced by Axalon, I have the script of the new translation of chapter 1 but as I have a lot of scripts in waiting, I try to juggle between my different projects + correction of the old ones.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 02:15 by: AGMlolz

Sweet revenge!

Posted on 30 January 2018, 04:28 by: Fate Averruncus

Hal seems to be experimenting with his stories recently. This is the most stories in a row from Hal I've seen that don't involve dismemberment, death, or both. Not complaining though. This is a nice change of pace.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 04:41 by: Idiot_Ronin

I support this type of revenge. The sweet irony.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 05:46 by: Megaton

@Fate Averruncus:
Actually, this story is over two years old and while the tank came out mid-last year, it is originally from Masyo 2015-10 (the epilogue seems to have come out with the tank?).

The irony is that his more recent stuff is what is much more hardcore, but he had a block of vanilla before you get to his really early stuff which was more mixed.

Seriously, if any of you doubt me go look at his Daienjou -Ikare Ikasare Iki Ikare- tank that was recently uploaded. Holy Bitch is a fluffy lovefest, Daienjou fucking has a NOOSE on the first page of the first story...

*Pulls up Awolnation - Run on playlist*

EDIT: Hmmm, I guess Hal is a woman. What a thing to find out while digging up information.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 05:58 by: H0R0

The title "..into a Bitch", and her hair is like dog ears... fitting pun.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 07:42 by: fap_1_master

This kept getting better as I read on , hal never disappoints.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 10:05 by: Viktorious

That's what happens when you don't drink your Respecting Women Juice.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 15:21 by: Loki The Flameshield

Now that is some revenge. He played with you? Treat him like a toy aswell.

Posted on 31 January 2018, 06:08 by: Haborym

He made her become just like him and then got what he deserved. Ah, delicious karma.

Posted on 31 January 2018, 09:04 by: dap00

So.... she got taken advantage of by a punk who used her for sex...
And instead of that putting her off getting taken advantage of again, she not only throws herself into getting used again, she does it with more guys who are rougher...
And in the end, instead of never wanting to go near the guy who originally took advantage of her, she rapes him repeatedly. And plans to reward his friends with the same.
I'm not even saying it has to make sense.
I'm just saying I thought there would be gas in that cup and a lighter in her pocket, or that she would break a bottle over his head.
The one thing I didn't expect her to give the guy who stole her virginity is more sex.

Posted on 01 February 2018, 03:08 by: Vilnius

I... I should have read these comments before looking up more of Hal's works.

Posted on 01 February 2018, 16:50 by: Janice_Em

@dap00

I don't really view it as her getting used again, but using her sorrow to become sexually empowered. For the wrong reasons at first, sure, but she is regaining what she lost -- her innocence--by embracing her sexual nature and giving in to the enjoyment. The reward is for her; she wants the sex, she gets the reward from the action now, not him. What he took from her, she reverses and now takes from him. Rape is about control; and that's why she 'gives' him sex. She is controlling her enjoyment through him as he did to her, and reversing their initial roles to her advantage. I imagine the insinuation is that she will rape his friends too. I think its better to view it as she isn't 'used' any more than the dudes in the comic who slept with 8 (or presumably more) women every summer are used. It feels slightly allegorical. Yeah, I mean, I'm probably reading too much into it, and it doesn't need to make sense, it's just a dirty manga with a mind break, but as a woman, that's what I took from it, and I thought it was pretty great.

Posted on 01 February 2018, 18:26 by: ohmygosh

@Janice_Em

damn that's deep I might ad what I liked in both chapters about Mana was her hairstyle both before and after her makeover she had hair that looked like animal ears! And while you could make the interpretation that this a sign that she will turn into a bitch here's what I think: those ears represent a certain deity in japan (I don't know which one though) a deity that you should better never piss off or she will give you a fate that is certainly worse than death. I might also add to the woman scorned that it for some reason reminded me of "Taken" with Liam Neeson especially the phone speech sceme The guys on the table seemed to know her (one of them talked about a gyaru after all) and she did tell her friend that she would meet some people. But yeah this story is definetly awesome!

Best music to listen while reading the after chapter Ida Maria Bad Karma

Last edited on 01 February 2018, 19:44.

Posted on 07 February 2018, 17:11 by: 霊烏路空

Gotta love it when shy virgin girls grow up into confident gyaru women

Posted on 08 February 2018, 17:52 by: ioctl

Why do you avoid contractions so often? It makes for incredibly unnatural-sounding dialogue.

Posted on 08 June 2018, 18:55 by: michka

"Speak Japanese, you retard. <3"

Im now officially masochist.

Posted on 23 December 2018, 05:42 by: Haborym

Turnabout is fair play etc. etc.

Posted on 23 December 2018, 11:48 by: sunshineandlolipops

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

About 12 years ago when I first got blocked by someone online this was basically my reaction: /s/496ba39481/1333447-13 Ah good times, simpler times.

Posted on 23 December 2018, 14:50 by: Wilfriback

@Megaton
Hal is a guy

Posted on 24 December 2018, 03:50 by: Biaza

Why does absolutely everything that gets uploaded to ex get tagged as bbw

Posted on 01 January 2019, 14:56 by: J0J0nnes

Justice boner status: *Fully erect*

Posted on 22 March 2019, 11:05 by: no_onara

We ought to have Power Reversal tag already.

Posted on 24 June 2019, 18:07 by: KaInEvIL

Ah hal, my goold old psycho <3

Posted on 24 October 2022, 15:03 by: 82515181519H

Whoever tag takayama chihiro, piss off
this got such a beautiful number

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[Hal] Kono Natsu, Shoujo wa Bitch ni Naru. | This Summer, The Girl Turns Into a Bitch. (Holy Bitch!) [English] [progste]

[ハル] この夏、少女はビッチになる。 (ほーりーびっち！) [英訳]