Follows on from "The Final Step" /g/1330239/1d0296e355/

Contains a brief m/f scene right at the beginning, but as per the "presence" rule I haven't tagged it. If it bothers you that much, skip to pg3 or 4.

Page 7 is low-res as I couldn't find a better one. Sorry. Also includes the "bonus" page a commissioner requested...a non-canon aside to the already non-canon story.

:edit: added pages 69 & 70

Last edited on 25 December 2018, 17:40.

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idk why but this guy's art is really disturbing

i wish i could put my finger on it

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@velikynovgorod

Well, for a start the artist isn't a guy....

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@velikynovgorod is right. I've never dug this artist's style. The ugly tiny grey dicks, the vague and blobby character designs, the weird color palettes that don't seem to have any attempt to work in harmony together, and the lazy facial expressions... Almost every facial expression is just a hollow variation of :D :O or D:, not to mention they have no sense of consistency. Characters bodies fluctuate from needle-thin to chubby with floppy moobs within a single story, and it all just comes off as amateur and insecure. I think the artist has a lot of drive and enthusiasm, but they really need to sit and hammer down some basic skills to keep a story engaging, consistent, and not so unsettling to look at.

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If memory serves, the person who made this has a fursona based off of Roger from American Dad, and the species is named Starchildren. I don't know how that meant ears or facial-hair, but that only adds to the confusion.

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I feel like this deserves an ugly_bastard tag

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