"Could you sleep other men if you were ordered to?" Laying on a bed, offering up my body… You want me, a virgin, to be a honey trap!?

The layout is frustrating to read, the panels have an odd flow to them, and for what little there is, I've seen *actual* porn films make more sense.

The art is solid, and the proportions are consistent. The artist has a great deal of potential, just needs to study how comics and webtoons should be made.

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@BaneESPr

The panels have that weird layout because they're designed to be viewed on a mobile app. I hate it too, but it works pretty well on a smartphone.

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So tired of people complaining about the webtoon format while reading it on a platform not made for reading webtoons.
What next, will we complain that soup is hard to eat with a fork?

Load the zip and open it in a proper reader that allows smooth infinite scrolling without requiring you to break your mouse wheel. It makes a huge difference. It's even better if you use a tablet.

Edit: Let's see how many haters downvote this post to oblivion because they have no argument.

Last edited on 29 December 2018, 08:45.

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