Hello. This is the first chapter of my first comic. You can view the HD uncensored version at my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/AstralBot3D

This is my first comic so there are gonna be a lot of things I need to work on. I would greatly appreciate any feedback to improve my work.

Thanks for reading my comic.

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If you like my work you can follow me on DeviantArt here:
https://www.deviantart.com/astralbot3d

If you want to support me I'm at Patreon as well:
https://www.patreon.com/AstralBot3D

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torrent tracker no enter
then no one have seed

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This was awesome, thanks @AstralBot3D, can't wait for more chapters to come....
This was both hot and arousing....Noice

@AstralBot3D, Not only that, this was well made too!!! Arghhh

Last edited on 08 January 2019, 02:45.

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@ airindex hey got any information for me to upload a torrent properly? I am still new to uploading torrents so please help me. I create a torrent and leave it on but I don't see it seeding. What is the right way to upload a torrent?
(Edit: Okay I followed a guide and I reset the torrent. Made a new torrent in hopes that it works. I still welcome any torrenting tips that way I can better prepare for future uploads.)

@ KamikazeShooter Heyhey. So glad that you liked it! Thank you so much! Feels great that I hit it with being hot and arousing! <3

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Pretty good. You should try to get some of your work on TGComics. It would be a good way to grow your fan base.

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@ Emphasis Thank you.

I'll consider it in the future to see if I can get some of my work on to TGComics. That'll be awesome, I love that website!

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You should consider having smaller watermarks, as well as making sure the watermark doesn't cover over speech bubbles.

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@ AthenaAcorn
Yeah. I want to respect the Patreon Supporters who supported me which is my I left the watermark. But I have considered when I release free content for everyone that I'll upload in HD resolution and no watermark besides the Patreon URL.

Thank you for letting me know about the watermark issue. I'll make the next releases better.

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