http://www.furaffinity.net/user/stoopix/

wouldn't be too bad if the person who made the speech sections actually knew how to do it... you can barely tell who's talking, and even then, since they're boxes, and there's no mouths in the appearance of speech, it all makes you think you're just hearing the thoughts in their heads... the only one that was obvious was the 'pink-ish' text boxes, because there's only one 'pink-ish' character... the rest is all.... "well, who's saying what to whom?!"

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oh the last panel on the last page is one that is good and one that the lucky winner wont forget in 9 months time until she comes back asking for child support

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@HikariNoKitsune The speech bubble color matches the character's eye color who's speaking. Not super intuitive, but you should assume the artist makes a deliberate choice with these things.

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So.... is the guy supposed to be somebody? Up until the last page where the other woman talks about "nobody wanting his autograph", I thought he was just security, making me think "Wow, this artist doesn't understand celebrity fantasies AT ALL; we want to enjoy a taste of the sexy singer-dancer shaking her goods on stage, not the HELP." But then if the guy IS supposed to be somebody, why isn't the groupie equally starstruck by meeting HIM like she is about his partner?

And I'm with HikariNoKitsune; even if we assume the not-dialogue-boxes are color-coordinated, it's still awkward to read because of the sentence structure, a handful of lines sound like thoughts instead of spoken dialogue, and some frames show other characters looking as though they're speaking when they aren't.

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Pfft she’ll get the autograph in nine months lol so sure of himself

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