I've been making sketch quests for awhile with varying degrees of success- my best lasted about 6 months. The quality is hit and miss, but I love how reader suggestions keep me on my toes. I've always wanted to do lewds, so I figured I'd make that happen in 2019.

And man, I'm the first to admit it's not my strong suit. But I enjoy working with sexual themes, so I'm gonna keep at if for awhile. Even just the basics like pacing and themes makes it obvious I'm pretty early in the learning curve for the genre. Excuse the bumbling and mistakes along the way.

I'm okay with how this one is coming. Depending on how the characterization plays out, it has potential- but it's not there yet, and might not make it. It was one of several lukewarm efforts from late 2018 while I was trying to crawl back towards being productive.

Sorry, fat is not sexy

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dont feel sorry. fat is indeed not sexy.
also with nose-potato and small tits combo definitely not sexy.

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This is fucking horrible

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None of these characters look sexy and the fact that you've tried to make them look "realistic" and yet not given the first woman any body hair whatsoever looks really weird. The hairless-and-fat look just reminds me of the Michelin man and the Pilsbury doughboy. Read through this comic and tell me you don't ever mentally hear the signature Pilsbury TEE HEE because I definitely didn't make it past page 7.

Wingdings as magical runes is pretty funny but not in a good way. You know you can install other fonts on your computer, right?

I'm assuming it's intentional that the second woman has a harelip. Not sure why though. Most people who have harelips know it's not attractive and will try to get surgery to fix it. Porn is probably the wrong place to be starting with your "ugly acceptance" movement.

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I like chubby! :D

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The female face is a huge turn off.

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I'm all for chubby, but not when the woman has man's tits and a man's face. I think you have potential in terms of artstyle, but it feels like you intentionally picked the most unattractive features possible for your characters' looks, maybe in a misguided effort to look original. I'm sorry but that's definitely not what erotic art is about. This style is better suited for a comedy.

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Oh how time flies.

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