Don't translate Japanese to English, if you don't know shit about either.

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Soo, let's see if this reaches 10 for the "poor grammar" tag requirements. Also, here's the raw https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=58186904
p1:
yeah, it is -> yeah that's right ("it is" just isn't an appropriate answer to the question)
p2:
new comer -> a newcomer
people -> person
admiral -> the admiral (unless his actual name is admiral)
I only stay -> (the japanese indicates this should be in the past. These are only suggestions that'd sound better, because there's not a lot to go on here) I've been stationed/ I've been assigned (to)/I haven't left

p3:
asdistic -> sadistic

p4:
it just a joke -> it's just a joke
admiral -> the admiral
everyone trust him -> everyone trusts him
gently -> gentle
not shield his fault -> ???

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