ive only just turned on the "Western" tag after being here for... a long long time, and one thing im starting to notice is all the characters talk too much. they are either needlessly talky when shit is going down, or are completely sarcastic and you just want them to die. page 9 is a good example of this... thats some terrifying shit but the protagonist is just stood there talking shit instead of doing something more natural like screaming at the top of your lungs in fright or simply running away as desperately as possible.