[Hoyadori (f)] Shokushu-chan to Futanari-chan | Tentacle-chan and Futanari-chan [English] [Digital]

[ほやどり (f)] しょくしゅちゃんとふたなりちゃん [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:	2019-04-02 02:48
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Visible:	Yes
Language:	English TR
File Size:	59.12 MiB
Length:	20 pages
Favorited:	439 times

Rating:		141
Average: 4.17

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Posted on 02 April 2019, 02:48 by: Old King Coal

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Did this mostly to practice Japanese. Feedback is appreciated.

Posted on 02 April 2019, 05:30 by: theboredotaku

This was adorable and sweet!

honestly the grammar was on point to me, but i'm a filthy casual so who knows.

The only thing i can comment on is maybe "Why not go back to my place together?" sounds a bit off, why not "Why not come live with me?" or like "Why not go back to my place with me?"
5 stars for cute love story though. <3

Posted on 02 April 2019, 07:51 by: zansan155

It reminds me:
"I have a pen
I have an apple..."

Posted on 02 April 2019, 18:50 by: TheGreyPanther

https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1666729/Shokushu-chan-to-Futanari-chan/
RAW: /g/1390278/47c74eec7e/
Russian Translation: /g/1391871/4c235a8d96/

Posted on 02 April 2019, 18:57 by: SCSS

Never use left text alignment. :V

Posted on 03 April 2019, 04:39 by: ztgasdf

Really adorable art.

Posted on 13 November 2019, 22:49 by: Thisandstuff

F's stuff is incredible. Just the right mix of cute, lewd, and eldritch.

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language:	english translated
parody:	original
group:	hoyadori
artist:	f
female:	futanari monster girl slime girl sole dickgirl sole female tentacles transformation