This scanlation does everything wrong you can possibly think of.
Please read some typeset tutorials, get more practice and let someone else handle the script.

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Poor Grammar

Page 5 "the beautiful maid girl is restraining in the tree"
Page 6 "i was stucked in the tree"
Page 6 "it should be passed three days"
Page 6 "what i would have happened if you didn't find me"
Page 6 "i heard incident that a object move freely"
Page 6 "that's happened same thing to the knives"
Page 8 " don't you like?"
Page 9 "seem like you don't satisfied yet"
Page 10 "you like a breast so much"
Page 11 "this is should feel so good"
Page 12 "discipline to me who is useless maid"
Page 12 "more poke a inside of me please"
Page 14 "human's man be fooled soon"

It would really be easier to look for the sentences that are not grammatically incorrect.

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I've said this before and I'll say it again.
If English is not your native language then don't bother.

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There are plenty of translators who are fluent enough in English to make good translations, even though English isn't their native language. Myself being an example. It'd be much more sensible to say, "If you're not fluent in English, then make use of a proofreader who is."

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Never in my life have I been OFFENDED by how bad a translation is.

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