The art is good, the action is hot, but there is something weird with the brunette's nose: in some pics, like the 13, it looks normal, in other ones, like 46 and 52, it almost sinks into her face.
Anyway, as I wrote, the comic is a good one and I will wait for Ep02 :)

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