I don't really like Incest, but better than lolis I guess.

Page 3 was weird, so if someone can check and find some mistakes, please note them.

Raws: /g/1340897/21d45b5476/

And yes, I have plans to do Ikenie Navy, unless I completely bombed page 3. If then, back to feed my gaming addiction.

>not liking incest
>"at least better than lolis"

You've just made sooo many enemies.

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do X because at least it better than Y
INB4 next time he will translate some loli themed doujinshi and then say it better than guro

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The artwork was great, but it was too short for my taste to really enjoy it.

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@Larequirem After doing so many Art Jam projects (all lolis), my shrink told me that it'd be healthy if I differentiate myself from time to time.

@Forgunia Yeah, this was short cause this is an extra from the main story called "Ikenie Navy." I did this first just to test the waters.

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i want more :))

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I hope someone will scan the physical of the main story that has less censorship than the digital one before someone translates the digital with the mosaic shit
something that almost always happens
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=447751&adult_view=1

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Some lines did not make sense. Pg.5 especially.
何度もしてるはずなのにすごい圧迫感
"No matter how many times it (the penetration) supposed to happen, it'll still give terrible pressure (on my stomach)"

This tell us that the daughter is unhappy with the prospect of pain.
As consequences, it makes the translation on pg.4 non-sense.

After a bit looking up, the problem is you translated "itte" to cumming.
Iku is slang for cumming, so is many other words which I suppose includes itte.
But for many case, you must first see whether it's literal translation make sense.
Itte means tell, thus this line should be
手が使えないからいってるのに
"I'm saying so seeing my hands are tied" (literally: I tell because I can't use my hands)

In conclusion, the daughter feels not a slightest pleasure in this whole rape affair.

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@feathered

Oh wow, I don't know what drugs I was taking when I translated "いってるのに" to I'm cumming, probably just saw "いって" and decided fuck it.
It is interesting though, especially pg 5. I thought 圧迫感 was oppression, cause I did have to look that one up. Should have looked harder cause "圧迫" "感" could also be pressure and feeling. Should have looked into that more context wise considering she did say his dick was big the bubble before...
Thanks bro.

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sequal with her killing the scum father and running away with her little sister when?

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Forgunia, Larequirem, feathered
oh all the jackass gather here

@ Larequirem
you improve since your days of incoherent blogging
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@Forgunia
For starter /g/691182/9342cddab3/ deluded
/g/1085218/384a5d9fe7/
/g/1103982/f8df91eeaa/ . look at this dumb shit in infancy. can't even read the story
/g/1421913/47b98e0f7d/ he got stopped before he got clout
/g/1456151/37f8b3cdd7/?hc=1#comments
/g/2192196/0e45d1f875/
you should just stay here instead of a being clout seeker

@feathered: haven't heart shit from you in 2 years. good, stay down

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tagging rtl (/s/719253674c/1411282-8)

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