Translated with google translator so the translation quality is a bit low.

The engrish is strong with this one.

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I want to focus on the sexy yuri and tight swimsuits, but the poor English and text outside of speech bubbles triggers my inner pedantic OCD shooting spree psycho.

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Raw: /g/1154100/17e215fdc0/

Well, this may need some work.

some random examples:
p. 2: "I just came to the materials and deliveries using the council" - you can't use a council for that,dude. "It is not good to force a child who doesn't understand the manager's circumstances for a while"- To force a child? To understand for a while?
p. 12 "please ask for the rescue of the child who came to their limits" - even if this was English, one child has it's limits, not their

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judging from personal experience, reading asphyxiation-themed doujinshi can cause brain damage
oh wait, that's because the terrible translation and typesetting

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*glub glub glub*

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Snuff I think? Bit hard to follow this English but it says she dies in the end?

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No, nobody dies at the end.. the girl in last frame is actually her with glasses

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Yeah I know the quality is pretty bad. I wanted to see if google translator could output anything understandable. Since the main points did work out well enough to be understandable I decided to upload.

I am challenging everyone to make better. I'd like to see rest of them translated too.

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If you are going to upload a google translate at least edit it for grammar and typeset it properly. JFC!

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I am getting sick and tired of these machine translations done by people who then say "I just wanted to see it get translated, how about someone else do some?". Bull. Machine translations and rewrites tend to make it LESS likely that something gets translated by because the translators, who have a hell of a lot of works to pick from and aren't really getting paid for this, will see there's at least something and find some other one to do.

Plus, even if that wasn't the case, this thing here is still SHIT TO READ. So stop acting like you're not putting bad works up or even doing something good.

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Did you even try to fix the grammar? That reads like absolutely unrefined google translation that you just copy pasted. From time to time I also use google translate to make some kind of translations for untranslated works but I don't publish them.

By the way: DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME KIDS! (There are easier ways to kill your girlfriend)

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Hmm, since everyone's so worked up about the TL...
How about someone sponsor me to do it? Just post a bounty or something?

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Despite @DJNoni's claims, and the unfounded claims made by supposed linguists, singular "they" is and always has been entirely correct in the English language, as the gender-neutral term. Never use "it" to refer to a person, except when referring to one that insists on the usage of "it" (e.g., you would refer to DJNoni as "it" due to its demand that you use "it" for the "child", but you would use gender-specific "her" or singular "they" for the "child" herself).

That said, wow, the English here needs a LOT of work. xD

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Rough Grammar Tag

p1
"it it too early, we both"
"I do not"

p2
"I just came to the materials and deliveries using the council..
"The kid is absolutely abducted!"
"It is not good to force a child who doesn't understand the manager's circumstances for a while..."
"Really? Wel..."

p3
"Truth"
"The"
"You know this piture, right"

p4
"After 5 dives for 10 minutes 30 dives for 100 meters"

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>Translated with google translator

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