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(C95) [Chocolate Synapse (Shika Yuno)] abrasion (Hinabita♪) [English]

(C95) [Chocolate Synapse (椎架ゆの)] abrasion (ひなビタ♪) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2019-05-15 13:29
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Language:English  TR
File Size:149.7 MiB
Length:18 pages
Favorited:898 times
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Average: 4.20

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Posted on 15 May 2019, 13:29 by:   B-DRAGED    PM
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Raw: /g/1377582/6f51961db5/

Translated by myself
I'm sorry for bad editing, bad grammar and/or typeset
This is my first time translating doujinshi

Hope you like it
Posted on 15 May 2019, 21:00 by:   Ancient-Alien    PM
Score +104
I can't say anything about the quality/accuracy of your translation, but I can give you some feedback on your edting.
You avoided the popular mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280px res images for editing. Good job on that.
Your editing can use some polishing, but I don't want to wash my eyes with sulfuric acid either to unsee it. So it's a solid first try.

If you want to improve your editing skills, I can recommend you this typesetting guide: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main. For more guides visit the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forums. For fonts check dafont.com they have a great variety of good and free fonts. You can also grab some of blambots free fonts at blambot.com. Or just google "free fonts" .
Posted on 15 May 2019, 22:19 by:   Soviet Power    PM
Score +0
Thank you for TL! Much appreciated, looks better than other first-timers I've seen here.
Posted on 15 May 2019, 22:38 by:   zPhate    PM
Score +22
So anyone else gonna comment on the producer cheating on his wife?
Posted on 15 May 2019, 22:45 by:   B-DRAGED    PM
Score +69
@Ancient-Alien thanks for your feedback, and thanks for the guide
Posted on 16 May 2019, 07:18 by:   Fate Averruncus    PM
Score +36
While I am grateful for the quality of the images themselves, I really do recommend finding a proofreader for grammatical errors. If you want I've got free time inbetween waiting for my circle to upload our rough draft for our next upload so I would be willing to even do a look-over for you if you want to PM me a file with the script to correct via the forums.
Posted on 16 May 2019, 17:09 by:   B-DRAGED    PM
Score +6
@Fate Averruncus I'll try sending it to you when I have time
Posted on 25 May 2019, 08:07 by:   Katsuragi_Hinagiku    PM
Score +7
is there any prologue or previous chap of this book ?
Posted on 01 September 2019, 02:28 by:   NXCProduction    PM
Score -4
@Katsuragi_Hinagiku

this might be the "after story" of Boku no Kanojo o Shoukai Shimasu series by the same artist. you can just search them.

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