I admire the dedication to shit nobody cares about.

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Honestly There a few other character people barely give a comic or images verse other. Tiny toon- Gator gals , Toonstruck- Ms Fortune , Polly the sheep, Marge the cow, Sly series- Mz.Ruby, The contessa, and Ms.Decibel.
But I still have to say good work with revive some things people might not seen like this show because it was never on my radar till now.
As for issue with again fact dumping. Honestly you still need to pull yourself back on it and let the art say what you need or it tell itself. Look at [Slypon] EHS First 14 pages it silent but you can tell there emotions of sexualtily take over then you get to pages 166 slypon now just let the art do the talking while a normal convo happen to someone down with their luck. This kinda why I say you don't need to go heavy monologuing or narrative focus on the art before the story.

Reason why i can say that take page four middle panel could of expand with the emotion artwork to 3 more panels itself drawing out the emotion between them both by taking some the sentencing and breaking it off to a pay out. Showing that she need him in way.
I just want to see you improve more and more both art wise and storywise.

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I get what you mean about all that. But I like doing narration. And this comic was rushed so I could get it out of the way. But I liked how it turned out over all

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People can say what they want, but this is still better than my doodles

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A lot of furries today don't know that Susan Swivelhips, along with Tex Avery's Red Hot Riding Hood, were the inspiration for Jessica Rabbit. Nice to see some of the older and, let's face it, forgotten furry characters of yesteryear get a little renewed interest. I look forward to the color version of this.

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I like how this is turning out foxtide888 keep up the good work.

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I love how you create your comics, the way your draw and plot each panel :) I say excellent job and keep up what you love and want to do

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Did he just call his own mom a crazy bitch? Rude, very rude and disrespecteful. Oh! And love this comic, keep doing, great job.

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Man, you went deep! I haven't seen Hoppity Hooper since I was a kid and I'm an old bastard now.

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(Kazz42) A guy on Deviantart who was a huge Hoppity Hooper fan practically begged me to make something with Susan Swivelhips. I looked her up and thought the character was interesting, so I made this. I didn't get a lot of thanks by the beggar for making it though.

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@Foxtide888. Hoopity Hooper Show is extremely obscure. I haven't seen it in syndication in like 30 years.

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(JackMorrison) Well shows like Rocky & Bulwinkle got better ratings. I imagine there are a number of obscure cartoons a lot of us haven't heard of. I personally lived through the 90s and like a lot of stuff from then and the 80s as well.

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@Foxtide888. Cool. This was a neat commission. In 1989, I was in 1st Grade when they last ran Hoopity Hooper in Syndication.

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(JackMorrison) Sorry for the really late reply. But yeah, it was a neat commission. Or at least it started that way. I was practically begged to make the comic. But eventually I made it my own. And while I don't know much about Hoppity Hooper, Susan Swivelhips intrigued me. There were a couple scenes in the episodes I watched that really made me laugh too. One of them being the guy complaining that Waldo grew hair on his billiard balls and ruined his billiards business. And with you being in first grade in 1989, it sounds like you're just a couple years older than me. So I imagine we got to see a lot of the same stuff growing up. I really liked watching shows like G1 Transformers and Exo Squad.

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Oh, the mid-atlantic accent...

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