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The art is really similar to kitahara aki, is this his pseudonym, real name, or one of his former assistant?

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Would've been better if we see a montage of MC beating up that sakaki guy but it's cute regardless

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Is...this supposed to be vanilla? Because that dialogue could use some work.

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Well, girl's smarter than all of the other girls in ntr works. Kinda wished he beat up Sakaki because that guy was a douche.

I guess this is what you would call purification.

That Sakaki is an asshole, hitting her.

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>COMIC Megastore 2012-07
doin naked selfies before it was cool

also, that sakaki guy is 100% a rapist

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To quote "Himajin Breaker" from another galary /g/1036928/472699147c/:

>Yeah this artist was a former assistant of Kitahara Aki. Look at the credits page on a Secret Society M doujin and you'll see Arisawa's name in the assistants list.
>Edit: Hell, he still is doing assistant work. His name is on the assistants list in Kitahara's C91 doujin.

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IMHO, this was just right; it had an element of realism that is more often than not glossed over in similar stories.

A "REAL" Man doesn't give a fuck if the woman he likes or loves is "used goods", as opposed to being a virgin, and Mikio made the decision to accept Nozomi ..... LIKE A BOSS!

Yes, I would have been pleased to see Nozomi's ex-boyfriend get some sort of smack-down for apparently striking her (Page 20), but seriously, unless Mikio can handle himself in a fight, it would have been a useless and wasted gesture.

It might not be "vanilla" in the strictest sense, but it's "Good Enough For Me".

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So, she dated a guy who pressured her into dating her, raped her and then hit her? Yikes. Least it had a happy ending.

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looks like arisawa masaharu is the vanilla version of kitahara aki
not complaining tho

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Well deserve slaps.

Hope this make her more "smart" in her emotion life... but this kind of girl may get in some "stupid hentai blackmail plot" any day...

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Despite the bittersweet flavor, it was a good read.

Wether we like it or not we all make mistakes in life (I guess it comes with being alive), and I'd argue the emotional ones are the ones that hurt most. And it's especially common for hormone-fueled teens to make these kind of mistakes - when you feel the world is yours and you think you can do anything and no one can make you answer for your actions.

I'm happy for these two, though I feel Nozomi getting slapped (or maybe more, I hope not but men are never good with rejection) tells us a lot about what kind of person her previous boyfriend was. And in a way this makes me happier because she's not involved with such a person anymore.

... by the way, she's totally my type.

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Sakaki might have done more than just slap her, might have raped her again and looks like he might have punched her too

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cuck-a-doodle-doo. Fuck a dumb slut and then throw her away.

Also
>A "REAL" Man doesn't give a fuck if the woman he likes or loves is "used goods", as opposed to being a virgin
Fine if they just met.
But a childhood friend who then proceeds to spread her legs on a first date to a random guy? And then goes "nope don't like. Lets try that dork friend"?
NOPE.

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"You worked up the courage to ask her out. You're happy she agreed to be an item with you. You want to celebrate with a special date. She consented with the sex. Wow, what a happy life! Next day, she asked for break up. WTF!?" The real circumstances might be opaque to us. But let's not quickly jump to conclusion. She might misconstrue enthusiasm as pressure. She's also at wrong side in the first place, why agree to date somebody if you're not at least have an attraction toward the other party? The slap might be well deserved. Well, at least she's happy right now.

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Proper course of action:
>Wanna give my pussy a try?
>Do you have a condom?
>no...
>me neither. And i'm not touching that worn out gross hairy meathole without protection. Let alone lick it.

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@MHM-2015, I don't think the problem is that she isn't a virgin anymore, but more the fact that she only decided to break off the relationship with the first guy 'after' the childhood friend showed he would allow her to swing branches. That for me is a giant red flag. It would have been more believable if she had parted ways with the first guy before she made a move on the childhood friend.

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P○ssy.

Why is page 8 the only "pussy" that's uncensored?

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So, he doesn t give a shit that some asshole punched his new gf...not ok. And all this stuff with "used thing" is quite dull for me

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We're never going to see MC beat up her "rapist" (btw it was never called rape, she literally just fucked some guy on the first date then told him that she went and fucked some other dude) because MC is a beta loser. The only reason she fucked some other guy first was because MC was too much of a fucking pussy to ask her out. She's gross because instead of doing the right thing and breaking up with the guy who deflowered her, she cheated on him with her childhood friend. She's not just used goods, she's just trash in general. What stopped her from giving MC the underwear and nude pic BEFORE she fucked some rando? MC should have had the balls to spit in her face.

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@Aelth, you could indeed ask yourself what stopped her from taking the initiative before she let herself plowed by some bad boy. So that's indeed another giant red flag that the MC chose to ignore.

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>ever being ok with used goods whom gets hit by the guy who raped her and not doing anything about it while still remaining by her side
That guy is a CUCK and there's no other way to put it. Japanese men, everyone

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This counts as pre-emptive netorare, or vanilla exclusively if you're into netorare, or a woman. Genuine vanilla? Nah.
"A real man takes sloppy seconds"/made mistakes etc. combined with the hetare (wimp) mc is textbook netorare talk you read in every full blown ntr gallery with a similar outcome.

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HEHEH man the funny thing to me about all you losers commenting about shit is the cultural disconnect from the the author and where they live compared to you lot and where you are all from. Like its cool or whatever to feel how you feel cause at the end of the day they are you own gay ass feelings. But at the same time god damn are you motherfuckers so weirdly lame and pathetic borderline self inserting into this shit and being so oddly self centered to such a weird as point that either on purpose or not you are forgetting the circumstances around who, what, where, and more importantly whom shit was made for. Primarily other nip motherfuckers. So damn weird and pathetic to see loser fucks in a fictious story try to be all tough and shit and virtue signaling like dumbasses about this shit like a bunch of loser pussy ass faggots i swear.

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Something is missing in this story...I feel like it's not complete at all. I think it would have been better off if the author had divided the thing into three chapters. The first where we see her with her first boyfriend (confession, date, sex scene & after maybe a more psychological scene where she regrets what she did and the plan she decides to put in place to win her childhood friend). The second chapter would have been this one, with the scene of the breakup between her and her first boyfriend (who knows, maybe she told him something like "I used you when I NEVER had feelings for you and in addition I cheated on you with another guy this afternoon", and then the slap would have been earned), and finally a third chapter that would have been an after story where MC would take (hypothetically) her childhood friend's anal virginity (why not?).

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@ valandion: thanks for the name. I thought I saw the girl’s faces by other artist but when I check this artist I only ever read /g/1036928/472699147c/
EDIT: plot twist: they are the same person?? /g/380054/63925131fb/

Also good url number

For future readers you might want to think twice before reading comment section before fapping to it. The top comment already make it apparent but lets just speak about it clearly
Q: Is this ntr?
A: depend.
-If we use Japanese perspective this is netori. Not full netori as mc doesn’t ‘fuck to steal’ her but still fuck her and about to take her
-If you think hentai mc should be a harem protag who should always get all virgins, yes.
-by this site definition this isn’t tagged ntr, either because 1) there is no sex with the other guy 2) mc emotional condition end in good note, not evoking negative sympathy

@Forgunia: reply to 1st half of your comment, do you read the story? Probably don't. Also you probably expect ntr, too bad you cant read! reply to 2ndhalf of your comment: fuck your redflag, wimp

@ tenyao1245: Man I really want to vote you up just for calling these pretentious “dominant male” under threshold, but the unnecessary cursing make it look like a pasta. Let me fix it. Here we go:
The funny thing about you losers commenting is the cultural disconnect from the the author and where they live compared to you. Like its cool cause they are your own feelings. But don’t you borderline self inserting into this AND are forgetting the circumstances around who this was made for? (idk, maybe Japanese? ) . So damn weird seeing you virtue signaling as if the character inside the story are real person doing it unironically instead of for the sake of this hentai
now my addition to that
@feathered and all other entitled comment below threshold : you think mc shouldn’t get her just for that? Thinking she is bad for that is thinking with your dick

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