Page 18 isn't translated.

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Shouldn't it be "it's true, you aren't a girl"? Otherwise it doesn't make sense.

Edit: now that's a low effort fix

Last edited on 26 June 2019, 11:22.

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That dude is so lucky! The surprise butt sex scene on page 8 cracked me up!

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You should really get someone to proofread the translation before release. Grammar errors aside, some sentences feel weird to read and unnatural. Still, I appreciate your effort.

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The typesetting is a little awkward but it's readable enough. Keep practicing and you'll get better.

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what about part 1?

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On page 9 there's an untranslated speech bubble.

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Page 9 missing speach bubble:
"Go- Gomen
na hya...
-n gi!
(i.e. They're Just moaning sounds)
Page 18 seems to be translated, they didn't use outlined text.

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It's an interesting start with us seeing the girl that bullied him because she liked him finally getting in on the action. But it gets really good once Sensei gets involved again. Seriously back on track. I like seeing his bully get into it, but it feels a little bit like she doesn't have enough development. Still sexy to see her go Domme though. The end is really hot and full of fetishes but feels rushed. I wish we had gotten another chapter rather than the kinky femdom pegging montage at the end. I don't think that the chastity belt tag is valid here either because it only appears in two frames of the last page.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 4. All out of 10.

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