Seems to be machine-translated. Could use touch-ups in the sentences. I'd suggest changing the Font next time as well.

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Thanks you!

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I will be honest my favorite part is the last page by terasu, i wish someone translated the other works with this girl, or that the author made a proper series since it seens hot.

PD:my mouse is double clickin like crazy so if there appear a couple of blank comments sorry.

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Besides part 1 and part 2, there is additional material about Another Page's Konoha is at /g/1839943/cf2d7c45f3/

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Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 7. All out of 10.

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