Part 2 of my DDLC doujin. Sorry for the inconsistent upload schedule, life finds a way to drain all of my energy lol.

Don't worry about the ratings, I think this needs a gold star on the fridge! Well done, OP!

Base +4, AutumQueen92 -6, Oversmash +7, magicalstring +1

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YYoOIGBcN48

Base +12

I’m voting a 3 out of 5. It’s a cute concept and I applaud the effort. The dialogue is a bit stiff and parts of it don’t really capture the kind of playfulness I associate with Sayori, like if I was just shown the dialogue with names removed and told it was a DDLC girl I would have guessed Natsuki or Monika for most of it, although the choice of naked apron is definitely a Sayori kind of thing to do.

The art isn’t great but I don’t draw, so you’re already doing better than me and most other people. Don’t get discouraged by the low score for now, the only way to get better is to draw more. Everyone has a million good drawings in them waiting to come out but before they can you have to get all the not so great ones out

Base +6, fappyqaz +6, Jentax +6, scyne +3

please tag this kind of stuff as western

Base +2, A Concerned Citizen +6, bonzaimonkey +11, Bring Stabity +6, The Inker -8