Moved the credit page to the back, as requested.

You can buy Kurokawa Otogi's "Paizuri" here: https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=360231&adult_view=1
And their pixiv post on the subject is here: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=68518903

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D’aww, sweet vanilla is always nice.

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what the fuck? a new Otogi translation?
what is this alternate universe I stumbled into?

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The question is, who did she lose her vcard to?

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She will grow even further

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I would suggest you move the credits to the end of the piece, however the translation is not bad at all
She was very cute when she was flat-chested, but those huge breasts amplified her sexiness 100x
Kurokawa Otogi never dissapoints...

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Anime puberty is fucking crazy, man. I ain't complaining, though.

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>pg 9
is that an Eminem reference

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Thanks, hope someone eventually translates the whole Paizuri book.

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It doesn't prove anything but when he puts it in she does begin crying. Omitting the blood might have been an artistic decision. Neither of them mention losing their virginity nor do they mention past lovers. She'd also been in love with him for years, so there's that too.

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Blood = virginity taken is just an old trope, there's some truth to it but it's not set in stone. Losing her virginity doesn't guarantee damaging the hymen if she's relaxed and ready. The hymen can also be damaged in events unrelated to sex, such as during sports. It's also possible she masturbates with toys while thinking of him. Something-something speculation, I wouldn't worry about it too much, 'specially with this sweet vanilla here.

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Fock! I came so huuard that I blacked out! Gonna be sore in the morning...

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I think her flat-chested middle-school self was cuter than her grown-up version.

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