3º part of my vore comic "Naga Story".

You can support this commic here: https://www.patreon.com/natsumemetalsonic

Language: Japanese
Puns: Yes
Martini: Shaken, Not Stirred
Gang: Back Together Again

I predict this will go gloriously off the rails, and look forward to groaning over every bad pun along the way!

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More like Hedonist Club.

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Why did you not upload this to your Ekas account?

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Oh boy! Here we go again, Ladies and Gentlemen.

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ree when is update

Oh, look, Midori without a giant, wobbly vore belly. o3o

Last edited on 11 July 2018, 11:57.

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Sure, the club gets a lot of new members, but the turnover rate cancels it out.

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What's the point of you're just going to skip over the best parts? There should be at least two pages between page 4 and 5 and a few panel in the middle of page 5. This is actually why I stopped being a patron.

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i hope midori will digest those two and play it of as a falloweing orders and playing with her "food"

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It's been like 3-4 months and we only get 2 more pages? > ^>

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Awesome work

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we take what we can get

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"Your daughters and all of you are terrible people. I recommend death by digestion."

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i hope they payed up front ! you will not resive payment when custermers are dead !

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Awesome work

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Part of me prays for the green dressed mother with glasses and brown hair to swallow her own daughters and make sweet love to a young lover or potential male lover :3

Happy to see your stuff officially posted by you Natsume <3

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i love how ridiculous this story gets as it goes

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Cool cool. So basically the snake girl is the Dragonborn with a speech 100 convincing everyone to kill themselves with 1 speech bubble check.

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Is this the end of Rika? I've been waiting for Melinda or Midori to finally digest her since chapter 1. XD

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She doesn't have 100 speech, just a pheromone that brain washes people. It was mentioned in a previous picture though it wasn't part of the Rika - Naga series, it was the same Melinda. You can even see the purple haze surrounding the mothers as she "seduces" them. They are literally getting mind controlled into being her prey. As far as we know, every single person she ate, was manipulated into doing so as she never mentions being able to turn the pheromone off. Even those with stronger wills like Sora and Rika eventually just give up. Note that while she suggests that they "find their path" not a single one ever gets pred - not even when playing or practicing. Its prey every time. The whole "love" and "desire" speeches are mostly just fluff and filler before the meal.

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someone how see it. thank you Zipszip. she so forcing them

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@zipzip so is pg25 just lying to us?

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dumass ! no one payed ! also she did use pheremons on them !

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What i would like to see next is a scene where a certain naga meets a certain daughter's group of friends.
An digestion is a result~

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so ? she littlerey see her kild over 100 of people ? and now help her get away with this ? wtf ? so both are mass murderes ! also no hypnose or brainwash ? this is litterey what she dos ! also is there no males in the univers ? sins 1000 of women she has eaten ! mothers ! daughters ! no husband has looking for them ? and cops exist in this world ?

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Rereading this, uhm...yeah, no matter how much narration is trying to convince us otherwise, no matter how much natsumemetalsonic breaks the fourth wall for a show-don't-tell violation of an exposition dump, Melinda is absolutely not taking willing victims. Otherwise there wouldn't be that pink haze. The haze is SHOWING us a predation tactic. Lamias (and I won't call them nagas, because Melinda is human from the waist up) are evolved to chemically induce compliance in their prey, allowing them to eat them without a struggle.

@Xion Rabbit I think natsumemetalsonic is just bad at making what they show match what they say. I can see a world in which, with better writing and art composition, the drawings would show some kind of effect that makes us think "clearly she is unlocking their true desires", but as is, the art itself shows her ability turning them all into prey.

Last edited on 25 December 2024, 17:30.

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