thanks a lot

Base +9, kondoriyano -6, DankOcean +1, Seibuh +4, Marisa Kirisame +8

我boki了

Base +6, kondoriyano -6

Content is great but that's too bad the guy only had two days to draw it.

Base +16, Pays +7, superczy +6, kondoriyano -6, DankOcean +1, Seibuh +4, theasdewe4ka +7, MightyHonks +9, cenro +7, BaconBuddha +6, UnknownThird +2, mrsmilesII +6, player4578 -5

amazing ! thank you

Base +6, kondoriyano -6, Marisa Kirisame +8

Very dynamic art style, especially if he was in a rush. Gunna keep my eye out for this artist.

Base +6, kondoriyano -6, theasdewe4ka +7, cenro +7, Serph666 +6, BaconBuddha +6

来个大佬出资汉化，非常喜欢

Base +2, gasaiyuno1771 +6, sgzz:) +2

期待完成

Base +7

Now we're only missing the alpha one.

Base +7

这个大佬画了好久啊~~ 现在是beta版？

的确很棒就是了~~~

让我想起了以前P站lostunicorn的葛城美里姐姐的那个铅笔草稿rape系列，也是超赞~ 表情很重要啊",,ԾㅂԾ,,"

Base +10, amo1235 +6, sect18 +6, qiuqiuqi131 +6

Nice poses and art, shame it's so rough though

Edit: Seems like it's a work in progress and he intends to continue at least

Base +11, DankOcean +1, Seibuh +4, cenro +7

Well you could see that he already spends years on this through his past work in his pixiv and pawoo,
and he said he would publish new progrsss in previous event but he didn’t.

Looks like he makes lots of change so it took so long time but still happy to see his new works.

EDIT: yes,it’s not finished, it’s still the different version of same work.

Last edited on 22 September 2019, 17:33.

Base +7, XUANJI112358 -5

OOF I really hope that someone scans the finished version in that case.
Now I can only hope someone uploads the alpha book instead.

EDIT: wait, so the alpha book and this are part of the one same work? I guess there's not much need for the first one then.

Base +11, Seibuh +4

期待完成 量大管饱

Base +6

I love this artist because he draws some of the most expressive faces I've seen.

Base +6, Lurker31 +5, Seibuh +4, RockGuy +6, OlgaFrow +9

What an unexpected masterpiece. I was disappointed at first by how the "sketchy" art style was so rough and felt like it was all just a doodle, but the content it holds within is simply fantastic. The facial expression of Rin and her body language getting more and more destroyed as it goes on is simply amazing. If this was drawn with more detail and put out again I'd dare say it'd be 6/5 stars! As it stands though, it'll have to do with a 5/5.

Base +7, DankOcean +1, Lurker31 +5, GO_KENTA +8, cenro +7

It feels like I've been waiting forever for this to be uploaded. Then again, it's been ages since the Alpha release was teased.

Base +11, Seibuh +4

The guys who bought, shipped, scanned and uploaded this are true heroes!

Base +8, sasa_poi +6, Seibuh +4, Lurker31 +5

absolutely amazing. stellar.

Base +6

爆发感好强（

Base +2

换个题材就更好了

Base +6

This finally gets sold and scanned and it's a fucking sketchbook. God dammit.

Base +13, MightyHonks +9, Guggy -7

超喜歡這作者的凜姦系列
可惜這本畫了好幾年到現在都沒畫完...也沒上數位本
不然真想支持一下

Base +7

thanks a lot

Base +3

@Zakuzelo: Still better than most doujins put out today, especially for rape/sadism fags like me.

Base +11, cenro +7, karararaku +6

Shame it seems mostly unfinished. I love the facial expressions and how disheveled her hair gets.

Base +7, cenro +7

Jesus, the finished product is going to be insane.

Base +17

I hope to live long enough to see the beauty that will be Rinrinkankan: Final Edition.

Base +7, cenro +7

best one I've seen ... he draws her more accurately than Ufotable does in most of UBW.

Base +6, Hyoros -16

@ash0787: that's because he uses the DEEN version as his base to this day. That will always be the peak version of Rin.

Base +12

完成度也还好吧，至少其中二十多页组成了α那本，这作者是真的喜欢凛啊，P站主页里面老早的作品里就有凛，不得不说作者很会画表情和腿部动作，比如后入体位小腿翘起来那里或者是正常体位时🐍出来时双腿打直等等，即使是草稿实话实话比很多正式售卖的本子要好用很多倍

Base +6

-comment about bad translation/scans
-this is shit because my opinion/ no explanation
-empty thank you for translation which raw i never read
-empty thank you and begging so you translate it it language you don't bother click
tenboro fell for free speech moron so now comments like those above will be on full display forever
Thank for advance for vote, in future when tenboro remove comment score (ala Youtube) you will only see positives on my comment

Base +5