My first new project of 2018, yet another ATLA AU story, with Toph as the main focus. Something to dust the joints off and really get back into posting again. Updates pending like all my other projects.

This is really good.
my only issue is it's kinda hard to follow in some areas since its black and white.
maybe little arrows to show which way to read?
Other than that I'm loving how this has turned out so far can't wait for more

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for future readers, the line in the middle of each picture is essentially a fold in a book. One that's read american style left right.

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Already loving it. Keep going :D

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holy shit. Using bending to enhance sex is such a wonderful idea.

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fuck. not even my greatest dickbending techniques is enough for this masterpiece!

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Better story-line brewing here than in most of the epilogue comics. All it needs is a big baddie and / or the spirits and this could be the best side story yet.
Plus the show already confirms that Toph had a short, sexual relation so if we push back Toph's growth spur then this could be canon. All summed up,
stuff is good.

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Jeez, Mr. self-insert better be careful not to cut himself on all that edge

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Can't really call Chan Lau a self-insert. Author Avatar? You could make the argument, but I'm black, so there's that. I wouldn't really call him an edgelord, either. A disillusioned Anti-social itinerant spelunker/jack of all trades with Fire National leanings and a very low opinion of Aang was what I was going for. I think I left my self-insert days far , far behind. Looking back , those were some embarrassing times.

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Not bad at all. This looks like a draft but if you were to finish it up, you might get some attention on patreon.

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Love your work...
Could be easier to read but aside from that I like the story.

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I love it, but I think the one thing that would make this *great* is if you'd back-light trace over it using clean, solid lines

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It's really good, it just needs a little bit of cleaning.

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Coming back to this years later I still have to say the bending sex scene is inspired.
I wish other artists were as bold and creative with the use of in universe abilities to enhance sex scenes.
Its not unheard of of course but very few ever go as far as this.

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