This isn't too bad. You do need to adjust the position of your actors such as where "AmeriGirl" is forced to to do the splits. Also as good as this is you introduce a lot of characters without any lines of dialog, it kinds of take away what's going on, such as who is the woman in black that we meet? Is she "AmeriGirl's" most hated rival or is she "AmeriGirl's" sidekick who has been missing for months and has been fucked into being evil? Stuff like that could make her shame a bit better then surface level. Also.. and this may only be me but. AmeriGirl's super suit is the National Flag of Texas, not America. So she's more like Texanna then an AmeriGirl. But still curious work and hope to see more.

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