Too busy reading the plot to fap to this

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That was unexpectedly deep.

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go from cutish nonsense smut to rather dark nonsense smut to super dark feely story to charming nonsense ending
i can get behind this

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Original can be found here: /g/1466119/0e3fbc23e5/
Chinese translation: /g/1464160/94b5bd6708/

Thanks for this translation, you did a good job. This is obviously a story of modern times. Even mind-control is done with an app! I don't want to think about the data that the big-techs would be able to gather from that app LOL.

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This was kinda wholesome. I liked it so much. It made me feel all fuwa fuwa :3

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Goddamn PTW!

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Oh shit it's Harumachi Tsurara time

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Alright, this was something new. The same old mind control app stuff, but with such a marvelous fresh spin! It's almost impossible to get to the bottom of who did what by the end of it and the shifting power dynamics were amazing! Not the same old boring dom/sub, but a constant tug-of-war. And as if all of that wasn't enough, it even had amazing drama/tragedy parts with fluff mixed in. And it didn't just end with the brainwashing app staying on the market unchecked and no one asking, making it much more realistic (as realistic as brainwashing apps can be, I guess). Not to mention the gorgeous yuri art, this is instant download and 5*! God, it's been a while since since such a gem was uploaded.

I wish more authors would do something so transformative, if they feel they have to use a tired old trope like this to begin with.

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I love that artist and that author (different guys ?) ! The art is so good, the sex positions were so good to see and even if the story was a bit confusing, I hope it could be the best for the two protagonists, forever together !

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I can't fap to this! I want more of the story!

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pg 25, "you're the one one taught me" -> "you're the one that taught me"
pg 32, "you used commands manipulate" -> "you used commands to manipulate"

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2deeep4mee

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"I mind controlled this girl into being my lesbian sex pet! mwahahahaha- Wait a sec.."
"What's wrong?"
"This is all wrong! YOU mind controlled me!"
"Actually, you mind controlled yourself"
"NANI? But that makes no sense... Wait a sec you thot, YOU mind controlled me into mind controlling myself so I would mind control you!"
"Shit, you figured it out... Can we still fuck?"
"ok sure"
"HAH! SIKE, you were being double mind controlled this entire time!"
"nuuuuuuuuuuuu"

you're welcome

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@RustySword7 Lol thanks for that beautifully succinct and accurate summary

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Written by M. Night Shyamalan and sponsored by Google Play x Apple App Store alliance.

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if you think the story is hard to follow imagine how hard it was to translate it >_< ... Even I'm not sure I fully got it.

Shichoson's stuff is always kind of confusing and there's usually a lot of dark twists because that's just how he (she? idk) rolls. But this one was fucking absurd even for shichoson's standards. In a good way, but still.

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Would have been cool if it had been the husband who was behind it all. You know, just to see his wife getting it on with a girl in secret while he jerks off from the closet.

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what the actual heck that was a wild ride

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Everyone talking about the story but cleary this is a secret ploy to tell us by author to not go p2w,or you'll spend too much money before you know it.just like being brainwashed.

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i always wondered why you don't see much mind control/corruption on yuri stories when they are all over the place in het/gay ones... well now thats why, this story used all mind control yuri in the universe at once

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Yo, Dawg I heard you like mind control, so I put mind control inside your mind control so you can mind control yourself to mind control me.

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The translator is a true man of culture. Check out the other shit he’s uploaded

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It's good, but I personally don't like how "normal" is marked with bold letters, that's not synonymous with straight.

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I saw the first twist coming, but not the second one, or the third. Or the fourth.

By the end, I thought we'd find out the husband put them up to it.

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@Mabifica

That's literally what it says though (in Japanese). That's kind of her entire character flaw too, it's not me (the translator) saying "straight = normal", nor is it shichoson saying that (I mean the legend literally only writes yuri doujinshi), it's this insecure kid who is pouring her heart out to her crush about her inferiority complex.

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I find it kinda jarring that the author apparently thought it would be ok to go back to an almost lovey-dovey feel after the realization that the girl's mind control had caused the mother to basically ignore for who knows how long her crying child! I would have killed her on the spot! I'm a man, so obviously there isn't a direct mapping on what's happened there, but, if I had a kid and anybody messed with my head causing me to ignore him/her, I would have killed her(the manipulator). I wouldn't give a fuck about the sex, I'd just straight up murder the fucking bitch!

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