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(SC56) [Ame nochi Yuki (Ameto Yuki)] Taiyaki Yorimo Suki na Hito (To Love-ru) [English]

(サンクリ56) [あめ のち ゆき (あめとゆき)] タイ焼キヨリモ好キナヒト。 (To LOVEる -とらぶる-) [英訳]

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Posted:2019-11-14 15:46
Parent:1517121
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Language:English  TR
File Size:12.62 MiB
Length:18 pages
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Posted on 14 November 2019, 15:46 by:   Darkyubey    PM
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Posted on 14 November 2019, 09:40 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +65
Thanks for translating this! By the way, here are a few minor corrections you might want to take note of, in case you plan to do an updated version of this work:

Page 5, panel 4: "What kind of ingredient did you use in cooking this?"

Page 6, panel 3: "What did you say?"
Page 6, panel 3: Princess, not Princes.
Page 6, panel 3: Sexually, not sexualy.

Page 7, panel 3: "His tongue is touching mine..."

Page 9, panel 3: He's not listening to me...

Page 12, panel 2: Cumming, not cuming.

Page 14, panel 1: "Did I hurt you? Sorry, sorry..." or "I'm really sorry..."
Page 14, panel 4: Working, not wotking.
Last edited on 14 November 2019, 10:15.
Posted on 14 November 2019, 14:02 by:   Darkyubey    PM
Score +7
@meow_pao
Thanks, english it's not my mother language so i do a lot of spelling mistakes. I will try to fix it!

Edit: I fixed the spelling mistakes, enjoy!
Last edited on 14 November 2019, 15:56.
Posted on 16 November 2019, 06:07 by:   hughidiot    PM
Score +6
Not to complain, but the quality went down after the edits; for example, if you zoom in on page 5, you'll notice a slight pixelation on the edited page.
Posted on 16 November 2019, 16:26 by:   Darkyubey    PM
Score +7
@hughidiot
I think that edits have the same resolution as the original ones.
Last edited on 16 November 2019, 17:58.

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