Based on Urd's introduction in Ah My Goddess, when she decided to have a talk with Keiichi while he was having a bath, then tried to mind-control him so he could do 'something' that would give him more confidence with women.

This time, she didn't 'try'...

Last batch, and that's the end of the comic, not including a few "montage" pictures of a debaucherous Keiichi/Belldandy/Urd threesome! And those should probably arrive faster since I'm not gonna be throwing dialogue into them.

To anybody who anticipated that the comic would end with Urd getting knocked up because of my "consequences" comment (When I meant dealing with a horny Belldandy who wants to get in on the fun), I am SO so sorry...and if you hear someone doing the Nelson laugh somewhere off in the distance, that's just the wind.

But, quick note for other commissioners, be aware of "spacing" if you want to commission a comic regarding how you want the panels set up and how much dialogue there is. Because I had a problem with these last three pages, (especially page 12) in that Arabatos followed my references and ideas for the panel layout damn near to the letter...and I realized I needed to shorten and adjust the dialogue by a LOT in order to have the remainder of the plot done with, and not cover-up his art. Was kinda frustrating because I sure as hell wasn't going to ask him to change everything after he did exactly what I wanted him to the first time, lol.

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damn,just a sample

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Promising.

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Please don't be too short.

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For the love of god I hope Arabatos doesn't turn this into an inflation/human garbage bag vore comic! The first page is fantastic and there is a sorely lacking amount of good Urd hentai out there. For that matter. Ah My Goddess doesn't get a whole lot of attention these days because it's not a "currently on TV" kind of Anime. That Hild comic could of been awesome but it was a terrible let down unless you are part of that very niche market who is into cannibalism.

Yay! Page 2!!! And we are still in the realm of a stable mental state!!!

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Truth to be told, I don't believe that Hild's comic was planned by Arabatos, but the commissioner, who, after all paid for it.

This one however seems to be commissioned from someone else (as far as I can tell, anyway), who probably won't go for the same themes. As a matter of fact, I've happened to run into this, here, along with the conmmissioner's comments: http://8buffaloes.tumblr.com/post/166755499546/there-are-good-days-and-bad-days-obviously

Also, I don't believe that this is a sample, but a mere work in progress, as it seems that there will be more, but none of that is currently done. This page is fairly recent, and there was even a WIP post of this, a couple of days ago.Hopefully, we might get more pages in the near future.

Here's the exact quote:

"There are good days and bad days. Obviously, today is a DAMN good day!

This short comic is based on one of the “IF” series of doujins, where certain events in Ah My Goddess turned sexual, like when Urd surprised Keiichi in the bath and tried to seduce him. In canon, Keiichi resisted Urd’s spell and sat back down in the tub whenever she told him to get out, which eventually resulted in her losing her temper. In the IF doujin, Urd got a LITTLE further, but everytime Keiichi thought of Belldandy, he went soft. (Including right before Urd was about to sit on his dick. She got pissed then too)

Needless to say, THIS comic won’t end up being a cock-tease like the original or the doujin that inspired it!

Thanks to Arabatos for working on this for me!"

Comments from the commissioner for page 2 can be found here: http://8buffaloes.tumblr.com/post/167180640381/page-2-of-the-amg-urd-and-keiichi-comic-by

Here's the exact quote:
"Page 2 of the AMG Urd and Keiichi comic by Arabatos, script by me.

Tentative title: A Sister’s Advice.

Trick I’ve started doing, which SEEMS to be helping out Arabatos a bit, comes from screwing around with Photoshop.

Basically, I write in the dialogue and try to keep it small and clear, he arranges it on the page and throws in the word bubbles, and then it’s more little tweaks until it’s done right. It seems to be making it easier on him, I think, though I wish I could help out a LITTLE more because I can not get the damn tails on the speech bubbles pointed where I want them to!

Anyway, I put in the Sound Effects on a whim, (THOSE I can do at least) and I thought they worked for the page, and obviously Arabatos agreed, lol!

Hope it convey’s some sexy humor along with the raunchy sex."

Commissioner's comments for page 3 and 4 can be found here: http://8buffaloes.tumblr.com/post/168170311886/a-sisters-advice-page-3-and-4-drawn-by

Here's the exact quote:
"A Sister’s Advice, page 3 and 4. Drawn by Arabatos, commissioned by me.

These pages are both awesome and a little frustrating to me. Awesome, because it’s hot as fuck and he did an amazing job. Frustrating because it took me for-goddamn-EVER to finalize the dialogue for these pages, and I’m ludicrously worried that I’m gonna end up annoying arabatos and coming off as one of “THOSE” commissioners with him. (asking him to make super-minor tweaks all the goddamn time, sending alternates to dialogue after he just finished the first version I sent, etc…)

I’m hoping I’m just paranoid, but I’m going to need to knuckle down and work like hell to finalizing the script and stop second-guessing myself.

I just want to mention though, that I LOVE arabatos’ skill with drawing internal shots as I described them to him. Because it’s my opinion that “less is more” with those, since it’s supposed to be arousing, not a study guide for an anatomy exam.

Plus, Keiichi’s dick isn’t pressing against Urd’s cervix.

And her orgasmic screams didn’t (and WILL NOT EVER) mention ‘getting pregnant’…

…Okay, I think I’m just starting to rant about shitty hentai tropes now, lol.

Anyway, hope y’all enjoy it, because we’re…nearly a third of the way through this comic!

And for those who might ask; No, Belldandy has NO idea what Urd’s doing right now. Whether or not she’ll find out later has yet to be determined…"

Commisioner's comments for page 5 can be found here: http://8buffaloes.tumblr.com/post/170366969376/page-5-of-a-sisters-advice-script-by-me-art
Here's the exact quote:

"Page 5 of “A Sister’s Advice”. Script by me, art by Arabatos.

It took me a bit to finagle making this part work on my head. IE, would Urd reveal to Keiichi that she just used magic on his man-tackle or not and how that would effect things because I’m VERY strange when it comes to porn having a semi-coherent plot, okay?

Anyway, the thought that occurred to me was how Urd tends to ‘miscast’ her magic sometimes and while her magicking Keiichi’s dick to make him bigger or boost his endurance would defy the point of building up his confidence, giving him a stamina tweak and adjusting his reload time fall well within the area of “teaching him how to work with what he’s got”.

However, Urd should have thought harder about what she was wanting before she used the magic words, “No Recoil! And one-no, TWO extra clips!” because there’s a very big difference between “Bullets” and “CLIPS”.

But don’t spoil the surprise ;D

On that note however, I’m considering taking a small break from this comic.

Not because I’m bored or burned out, but because for the last couple of weeks, the old VIPER series of games have just been NAGGING at me. Specifically, the waste of fucking potential they had with some of the girls, (Only scenes were rape scenes) and how the games were NEVER FUCKING UNCENSORED!

Don’t know why that’s been irritating me lately, but I’m considering taking a break from this just long enough to have a few pics done of my favorite VIPER girls (along with others, possibly) in lewd situations that don’t involve screaming “YAMATTE!”

Last edited on 01 February 2018, 18:45.

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@Shadow66 Don't worry, I'm sure this is just...the tip of it.

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hey friends i've been looking for the site Arabatos uploads to i cannot find it for the life of me! If anyone can help me it would mighty appreciated

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Is this a ah megami! Doujin... And keiichi isn't NTRed by a dozen of black guys.? Is that even possible?

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"Round 3, this comic is coming close to the end, with the next few pages being more plot-centric, as Keiichi and Urd deal with the consequences of their rut."

Judging what I seen, it could only one thing. PREGGERS! XD

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That's the Arabatos I remember.

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One Page lost Eine Seite fehlt
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It's cool. I don't mind this ending either. Quite the twist IMO

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Wow a Megami-sama doujin that isn’t NTR!

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Gotta admit, Belldandy is waifu material. 👍

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