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Somehow the boyfriend moaning "uha my frenulum" stood out the most for me.

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Thanks for sharing this English version!

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Frenulum is obviously a frequently used word that needs to be in every highschoolers vocabulary.

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a bad, a really bad English translation. it should be stripped and thoughtfully gangbanged till it's impregnated by another translator. which means this translactor is a potential cuckold, no offence.

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It's come to my attention that there have been some identified issues
with this translation. These can be fixed by me.

- I take it 'frenulum' (only added as that is what the guy actually said) is simply
weird. Would changing it to 'tip' be acceptable?

- The 2nd page is missing (not part of the narrative technically) but I
will include it.

Are there any other issues? I'm still learning and this can be a useful
opportunity for helping create better translations.

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She looks a lot like the girl in Kemigawa Mondo's Daraku Reijou, same schoolgirl clothing, blonde, big boobs, and let's not forget the NTR part. :P It's barely NTR though, you only get a very short glimpse of the boyfriend.

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Finally, some good fucking food. Light on the NTR so it's palatable.

"Dom't rape it back, rape it forwards" -Glenn Quagmire

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its cheating not ntr, translation isn't good but it gets the point across.
Thanks

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Too bad she was a slut and used goods. Stories where the girl isn't a virgin isn't any fun. Why would I care about a story where a girl gets raped if she wasn't a virgin to begin with? If a girl isn't a virgin, storywise she doesn't lose anything in a story when she gets raped... so the whole point of the actual rape in the story is lost. As is, this story wasn't even a netorare story... the whole story was just that her uncle had a bigger dick than her boyfriend and that she was a whore for his big dick.

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So, you are charging $1.20 a page for this quality, huh? Good luck with that.

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People who put major importance on virginity are just weird... Sure, there's a certain sense of satisfaction at the thought of being a girl's first, and rape might be slightly more traumatic for a virgin, but to say that she "doesn't lose anything" if she's fucking RAPED just because she isn't a virgin is just ridiculous. Whether she's a virgin or not doesn't change the emotional impact all that much.

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@Stopittarpit Page 18, the line "I'll take just a photo for tonight's side dish". The "side dish" is more accurately translated as fap material here, normally okazu does mean side dish but informally it means something you fap to, "food for thought" if you will.

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