3rd published translation

This one took me way too damn long to make, but I think it was worth the time.
This is the first time I edited background text as well, so any feedback is more than welcome!
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Thirdly, I'm no expert in Japenese by any means, so my translations might not always be correct.

RAW: /g/1358270/d0aa746e49/

Base +42, s4r +7, supersayan +6, Lostalgia +9, blue penguin +47

"Elina.. that girl's panties are visible again" > "This guy is looking at Elina's panties again."
"What about you, are you a vigrin?" > she is not asking him, she is teasing by wondering if she should give him the favor of letting him fuck her (however, only if he gave her 100k).
ひーど means 酷い not "crap".
"I just promised cooked rice! didin't I!?" > are you sure you are not using google translate? because it's really obvious she didn't promised "cooked rice" but is talking about sharing a meal like you do when you practice enkou.
"It's going to be cooked rice today" LMAO

Base +16, Pr1de +16, bigmak +6, mickl3 +6, Animefan268 +6, DazWolf +6, Ragna25 +5, Lostalgia +9, PinguPrin +7, kaomaru +10, dankestdungeon +16, mugen_darkness +9, SavageBlowJob +7, and 15 more...

@Bulopu I use jisho.org among other things. I'm still a self-learning beginner at Japanese so I'm taking a lot of time with each translation, figuring out how to convert the sentence in the best possible way.
Had no idea about 'enkou', this wasn't so obvious to me sadly.
Is there a place you know of where I can get feedback before publishing a translation?
Thanks for letting me know about the mistakes. Appreciated and noted :)

Base +3, supersayan +6, Ragna25 +5, Fudo Masamune +24, Mr.Awesomeness +6, dankestdungeon -21

Since the dude manage to steal the girl can it be classified as netori or is it doesn't count since her bf broke up with her.

Base +6, Lostalgia +9, Vanguard3125 +6, A_Taco_Stand +6, thathornyguy +6, WeebLord420 +6

people don't know how to appreciate cooked rice these days

Base +5, DazWolf +6, Lostalgia +9, 58569 +9, denisko616 +6, alkopone +6, A_Taco_Stand +6, Mr.Awesomeness +6, FrozenFyre +6, IncognitoMaud +6, thathornyguy +6, BFBK +6, as102 +10, and 8 more...

I've been cooking rice wrong

TBH this translation method made my duwang feels good

Base +10, xnon1 +6, PinguPrin +7, A_Taco_Stand +6, Mr.Awesomeness +6, Remeark +6

So wait, did the netori vanilla scene actually happen or was that all just a concussion dream after the old guy KO'd him for interfering? It looks like it's the protag having a "good dream" at the end.

Base +6, xnon1 +6, Vanguard3125 +6, noney +7, BokuNoGf +4, BFBK +6, as102 +10, WeebLord420 +6, fireorb21 +7, fap222222 +6

@Notalent I think the ex-boyfriend just beat him up after the video was sent to him. Seems everything happened was real, given the last panel.

Base +7, Zeratoth +6, Vanguard3125 +6, Whitebeard666 +6, PinguPrin +7, thathornyguy +6, yankeeboy27 +6, BFBK +6, as102 +10, WeebLord420 +6, -Syl- +7, Austriacus +6, fireorb21 +7, and 1 more...

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character:
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clannad
character:
akiko minase
sanae furukawa
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manamagu
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zen9
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bbm
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clannad
character:
sanae furukawa
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manamagu
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zen9
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dilf
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clannad
character:
sanae furukawa
group:
komorebi-notebook
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momiji mao
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dilf
schoolboy uniform
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cheating
paizuri
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glasses
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big breasts
cheating
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clannad
character:
akiko minase
sanae furukawa
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manamagu
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zen9
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bbm
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big breasts
netorare
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clannad
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sanae furukawa
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manamagu
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zen9
male:
dilf
female:
anal
big breasts
blowjob
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x-ray
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clannad
character:
sanae furukawa
group:
manamagu
artist:
zen9
male:
dilf
female:
anal
big breasts
blowjob
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x-ray
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clannad
kanon
to heart
toheart2
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akiko minase
haruka yuzuhara
sanae furukawa
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manamagu
artist:
zen9
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dilf
layer cake
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clannad
kanon
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akiko minase
sanae furukawa
group:
manamagu
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zen9
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hairy
milf
netorare
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clannad
character:
akiko minase
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yuuichi aizawa
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kirei na oneesan
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izumi yayoi
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dark skin
dilf
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blackmail
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kaori misaka
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kirei na oneesan
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ayu tsukimiya
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yuuichi aizawa
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sole male
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kanon
character:
akiko minase
nayuki minase
yuuichi aizawa
group:
shinanoya
artist:
yama
male:
sole male
female:
big breasts
breast feeding
double blowjob
lactation
milf
oyakodon
pregnant
sleeping
misc:
ffm threesome
group

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character:
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yuuichi aizawa
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shinanoya
artist:
yama
female:
lactation
pregnant

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kanon
character:
akiko minase
yuuichi aizawa
group:
shinanoya
artist:
yama
female:
lactation
misc:
group
mmf threesome

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kanon
character:
akiko minase
yuuichi aizawa
group:
shinanoya
artist:
yama
male:
sole male
female:
big breasts
lactation
sole female
tentacles

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kanon
character:
akiko minase
yuuichi aizawa
group:
shinanoya
artist:
yama
female:
lactation

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Translate (C76) [Shinanoya (YAMA)] V-TIC 45 (Kanon) to english

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parody:
kanon
character:
akiko minase
yuuichi aizawa
group:
shinanoya
artist:
yama
male:
sole male
female:
impregnation
lactation
sole female

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Translate and edit (C85) [M.I.RING (Migio Moto)] Lucy ga Sukisugite Ikiru no ga Tsurai + Omake (Servant x Service) to english

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parody:
servant x service
character:
lucy ... yamagami
yutaka hasebe
group:
m.i.ring
artist:
migio moto
male:
sole male
female:
big breasts
glasses
sole female

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Translate and edit (C85) [Campers (Gatling A)] Joudan dewa nai!! (Servant X Service) to english

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parody:
servant x service
character:
lucy ... yamagami
group:
campers
artist:
gatling a
male:
muscle
sole male
female:
big breasts
blowjob
glasses
handjob
huge breasts
nakadashi
paizuri
rape
sole female
x-ray
misc:
full censorship

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This technically isn't cheating. When the guy got punched he dreamed the whole thing. That's why the guy is sleeping on the floor happy.

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I'm really confusing, part of me think it was real and another it was not.

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Whether your Japanese is good or bad (or nonexistent), if something you translated doesn't make senese it's likely that
your translation is off ...

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I didn't look through it all, but the first two lines are both incorrect. "Your new boyfriend is a university student, right?" You don't need to include her name here, as it was just mentioned the previous panel. "What's he like?" Jisho is a great resource, but it can only do so much for you. Utilize Google to search for things in Japanese. Like やばい 英語 if you need phrasing ideas for the specific context. Props for working your way through 30+ pages though. Don't let criticism get you down, keep at it. You'll get there.

Last edited on 19 December 2019, 08:24.

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Your Japanese is probably fine. You need to take English classes though...

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VIGOROUS MOTION!

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This is just a theory, but one of two things actually happened. Either he just got knocked out and he imagined it all, which does beg the question "What does the last page mean?", or they actually did hook up, and she let him sleep off their sex session somewhere. It's pretty unclear where he was laying in the last panel, but it does look like the ground. It's really the panel with her having just had sex and watching the video that makes things seem unclear. Like, if she's dating the guy, why leave him sleeping someplace strange?

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Why my man's looking so thick on page 9? Lol

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