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Error(s): Pg9: "Can you hold it yourself open?" should be "Can you hold it open yourself?"

holy censor bar batman

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@ 2cooked4you: in some bubbles the text is not centered.
1) top right one on page 1,
2) double one in the bottom panel of page 3, the text in the rightmost of the two is not centered
3) double one on bottom left of page 5, the text in the rightmost of the two is not centered
4) top panel of page 11, the first double bubble on the top, the text in both is not centered
5) bottom right panel of page 13, double bubble on the right, the text in the rightmost of the two is not centered
6) top panel of page 20, the rightmost bubble of the double bubble has the text that is not centered
7) bottom left panel of page 20, the double bubble, the rightmost has text that is not centered
8) Page 24, the top bubble, you should make the text in the rightmost bubble smaller so you can move up the one in the left, that white space in the left doesn't look very good
I think you should fix those, lol.
Wow, so fast, god-tier work. Keep up with it.

In any case, while this story is the usual "just the tip but then I'll stick everything in/just looking but then I do everything else" (in this case the whole process is also hilarious as fuck btw) I have to appreciate the dedication of the dude in eating her out.
There's an absolutely absurdly high number of pages of cunnilingus and zero pages of fellatio. What kind of sorcery is this. More doujins/mangas should be like that.

If only the censorship...
And about that, @Puck.A: That's Comic Shingeki for ya. There are censorships that remove more of the genital than this (i.e. whiteout/blackout censorships also called "lightsaber dick" and "darkness dick"), however, Shingeki's censorship's aim is clearly to piss off the reader because it doesn't even hide the sides or the shape of the genitals yet is so thickly annoying...

Last edited on 04 January 2020, 09:50.

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maybe i should try that line sometime... who knows if it works

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@keronos tell us what happened once you reach jail!

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pls gibe de pusi b0ss

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Dude's gonna be paying for anything she wants for the rest of his life, lol.

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buying her stuff and listening to her demands in exchange for sexual favors...so they are basically married.

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