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I think am going to pray and pretend I didn't read this at all...

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man that cover is glorious

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/g/1542929/211d1f418b/ raw/original

Good stuff, thanks to all involved for all the effort and sharing, nice work :)

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Damn cliff hanger

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Next chapter is the thing I knew would happen since I first read chapter 1 and I've been waiting for it.

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Yui has been made into a dog bitch. Threesome confirmed for next chapter.

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next chapter is c98? or before it

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I saw this ending coming a mile away. Now the next chapter will nine times out of ten show the other sister trying to get the NTR guy back and the sisters competing against each other for him. As for the senpai even if he was able to endure long enough to win the other sister back he wouldn't have been able to keep her for long.

Knowing this kind of story he would have never been able to satisfy her and she would have eventually went back to the 'brat' to get sated. The only real thing that I wish would happen would be the little brother who was introduced in the beginning would come back and see this. I think he was supposed to be the original person to get NTR'ed not the Senpai who just got it.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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"I'm being blackmailed into having sex, so watch me act like a dog while my blackmailer forces me to cum!"

I love how dumber the story gets.

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Next chapter: Let’s get ready ta rumbleeeeeeeeeeeee!

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@krispypanda what do you expect from hentai? ive yet to see an NTR hentai that doesn't have crap story with idiot level logic. if you blackmail a woman in real life she would probably call your bluff or worse call the police or tell her husband or boyfriend too much can go wrong.

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Ah yes, the series that people consider NTR even though the siblings have shown absolutely no romantic nor sexual interest in each other. Your sister getting a boyfriend isn't NTR.

Aha! But this chapter has a guy that was interested in the girl but never asked her out! The girl that rejected you fucking another guy isn't NTR.

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@Kelsero And another brainlet who thinks NTR needs a romantic or sexual interest.

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Yui with that thiccc doggy swimsuit :D. Next chapter probably be the end with Threesome baby!

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@Schmand

Maybe not, but it certainly helps.

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@jcarlosbg

If you mean this one:
/g/1543401/c01b907513/

I'm currently working on it

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I kind of hope the next one will be the last. Every chapter feel like a copy and paste with the sex scenes and dialogue.

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Man, can't wait for the long awaited threesome! I really hope he'll draw a lot of kisses too! Some chapter are missing them so i really hope the threesome will have them!

Kissing both sisters at the same time and so on

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@giga-ganon

That's the definite conclusion if this artist's track record is any indication.

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Last time, on 'The Dumbfuck Sisters'......

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this is ruff

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I want see a twist for this story but probably going to get the same cliché NTR for the end.

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So, the little brother will be brought to you by the end and witness his sisters getting fucked in front of him like some cliché NTR ? By the way what this faceless dude doing here anyways.

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@dgjdgjdgj Yeah can’t get anymore clichér then that but yeah it really wouldn’t be all that surprising if that’s how it will go down. We all kind of forget he actually a big part on why things are going the way they are going.

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>Exit little brother
>Enter random classmate

Fuetakishi is trying really hard to keep the NTR aspect going on even though it's pretty weak at this point. Actually, for the last four chapters or so this became netori rather than netorare, albeit a weak one at that . At least I hope to see a little bit twist at the end, like the brother being forced out of the house after he witnesses the inevitable threesome of his two sisters and his "best friend". I would even settle for the brother running away never to be seen again.

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I know the NTR vibe is strong but …. you came there to deal with a blackmailer.... why is violence something you are completely not prepared for? I'm just confused what his game plan was aside from show up and be a cuck?

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"We all kind of forget he actually a big part on why things are going the way they are going."
Funny, I feel like the kid could say this exact same thing while fucking the sisters at some point during the next chapter.

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Imagine the brother finds out...And he's happy that his sisters are happy with his best friend. It would be the greatest plot twist in hentai.

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@Shekkey

It wouldn't be a twist it'd be just plain retarded. This is NTR after all, you can't just ignore what happened until the end and make an asspull happy ending, someone needs to get hurt. Not to mention, there is quite a bit foreshadowing that it won't end well for the brother. Last but not least, Fuetakishi is not Takenoko Seijin.

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-Claims she's being blackmailed.
-Is offered her freedom several times but doesn't leave out of jealousy.
Blackmail isn't her problem, addiction is.

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Some things I've noted about this translation as I read through it:
- Strokes were given a fuzzy outer glow when the raw has a solid colour. (p.2,4,5,8)
- No punctuation is used on the end of sentences, or if it is, it's placed on a new line. (p.2,3,4,5,8,13,20)
- No hyphens were used for honorifics, which can be a little confusing for people who are new to them. (p.3,5,6,8,12,17)
- Hyphens were used strangely in this English version. Instead of extending the vowel sounds like in the Asian TLs, it just indicates an abrupt stop in English instead. (p.3)
- Spaces after ellipses before text, but no spaces before ellipses after text. However, on page 4, panel 2, the ellipsis was used as follows: "I was // ... acting a little out of character, right ?" which is inconsistent with how it was used throughout the rest of the doujin. (p.4,12)
- Physical page edges and tears weren't cleaned. (p.4,8,13)
- "After all" is misspelt as "afterall". (p.4)
- Hyphens were not positioned correctly to break words into syllables. (p.4,5,6,8,9)
- Although some simpler patterns were cloned, things with a gradient or more lines were whited out pretty obviously. And on page 5, panel 5, the ellipsis wasn't even erased either. (p.5,11)
- Some text was squished/distorted horizontally for some reason. (p.6,17,19)
- Redraws of some patterns appear smudged. (p.7)
- Missing auxiliary verb: "You're the annoying guy who being a busybody when I went to see Yui nee during her ballet lesson" (p.8)
- Redraws of gradients can be obvious even though it can be properly and easily cloned. (p.12)
- Romaji was used instead of an English. (p.12,14,20)
- No apostrophes were used to indicate missing letters from a word. "cause" != "because". (p.14)
- Any form of voiced sounds in bubbles weren't translated if they were hand-written. Probably because they're in Japanese, lol. (p.15)
- "That brat is so hung // !? // it's even bigger than me // ..." So his dick is at least 1.5m long, right?
- "... // Are you getting a better view if I come closer // ... // ?" Who is talking here? How is she sliding his body towards the other guy as she sucks it? This is either bad phrasing or mistranslation. (p.20)

tl;dr:
I didn't list everything, just some examples. Not going to read past page 20.
I dunno. I was linked another verison for this doujin which might be a bit better than this one. /g/1560538/5039488ff9/
(Because I'm pretty sure the other one was translated from Japanese --> English instead of Japanese --> Chinese --> English, like this one.)

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update on new issue: https://twitter.com/fuetakishi/status/1237654284298104832?s=20

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