Now with 2x the Neps

Please let me know if you find a mistake or have a better translation...
Some of the Neps' dialogue was hard to make sense of for me.
Also it doesn't help when "I" can be either one of them.

Edit: Fixed misspellings, thank you bigp0weR and LRaglan.

Raw: /g/1505244/eef48cf741/

Thank you bigp0weR for your corrections

Keep up the amazing job translating! Instant 5 star from me!

Base +14, letoplel +19, Addelheim +8, 20Ilya +32, Rebel Ry +6

p. 18: "It looks like it feels awefully good for both of them..." - misspelled 'awfully'
p. 20: "On sencond thought..." - misspelled 'second'
p. 34: "...took the whole day and resulted in an outcome that reverserd the order of things." - misspelled 'reversed'
p. 35: "We'd find that you traveled to another dimension..." - We'd 'found'
"...that we'd never meet a second time..." - we'd never 'met'
p. 36: "...and there a many parts..." - there 'are' many parts

Base +8, tabibit0 +8, Rebel Ry +6

The stuff on 35 is hypothetical would happen thing, not a past thing. Find and meet are correct, not found and met.

Base +6, tabibit0 +8, ArchFall +5, Rebel Ry +6