A young girl, inexperienced and naive wanders lost through a nearby ruin. Preoccupied she fails to sense the demon sneaking up behind her.

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Nikraria
https://twitter.com/nikraria435
https://www.patreon.com/nikraria?fan_landing=true

Story and art is good, but damn the text on the right-side is super hard to read

Base +7, wtfjones +6, onyxarmor +6, The_Minotaur +6, drakengar +6, DarcSygyl +6, darkerdrick +6, Doc Hope +6, S.Zombo +6, getalife +9, raysson +7, Takepyon +6, swordpaladin +9, and 7 more...

Text is unreadable. I get the impulse to want to make the text look artistic and fit the theme of the artwork, but thats not the point of text. The point of text is to be communicate and in order to do that well it needs to be easy to read. The rest of the comic is solid, but the text needs a complete rework.

Base +7, Takepyon +6, Der Fuhrer +7, ZRQ +6, Not Benedict +6, __Render__ +6, Reson +6, phenomenalrainmaker +3, blanks +10

Actually, the text is readable... if you cut the pages down the middle and do this as a 20 page instead of a 10 page comic. Then you can properly read the text

Base +8, Reson +6