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(initial post page 05)...

1. Art-wise, I give this 2.5 / 5 stars for Art Quality, definitely needs improvement & refinement.

2. Conversely, I also give it 3.5 / 5 stars for plot (pun intended) consistency as a Yuri-threesome. Far too many of these h-comics (not just MLP:FiM) start off as some good Yuri, then quickly (&/or suddenly) go off the rails for anything but Yuri. ;<

Thanks for uploading this, bluack10. :)

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3. [edit-update]: page 10... Okay, with that ("hug it out") ending, I bump it up to 4 / 5 stars; it was a very appropriate end-cap for MLP:FiM themes and the CMCs' enduring Friendship. And I admit, it made me go "D'aww…". ;>

Last edited on 25 February 2020, 16:03.

Base +11, Rhanar +6, Reson +6, bluack10 +6

I uploaded my own version of this, I didn't know it was already here.

Base +1

On no, you guys, there's Converted Mana Cost going on in that barnhouse!

Base +6, Miko Neko +7