the font and wording. if it's accurate translation it's worse than I remember mozu ever writing.

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Where do all these ["insert curse of your choice here or don't"] who are too lazy to read a typesetting turorial suddenly come from?
You commited two of the worst sins of typesetting: 1. you used left align for your text and 2. you didn't use a comic font. That's why your work looks pretty ugly, if you ever asked that yourself (I doubt that).

Q: How can you improve?
A: Read at least one typesetting tutorial like: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main (if you want more visit the "cove of scanlators" on the forum or google it)

Q: What fonts should I use?
A: You should use comic fonts like anime ace, wumrics bravo, wurper comics, Komika or wildwords.

Q: Where can I find free comic fonts?
A: You can find free fonts on sites like dafont.com (or just google free fonts) and you can also grab some from the free section at blambot.com.

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Friendly reminder: E-H has a bounty system.
You don't know how to translate and/or edit but still want to take part in the translation process? Well collect some credits/hath and create a translation or an editing bounty.

Some advices concerning bounties and the translation process in general:
1- Quality check is a thing. When you create a script / edit something / receive the files thanks to a bounty, try to find someone in order to check the files and see if something needs to be improve.
2- Proofreading is a thing. When you create a script / receive a script, try to find someone who is fluent in the language for which you provide feedback.

Last edited on 29 February 2020, 22:14.

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The only real complaint I have is that you didn't translate the little speech bubbles, like you can see on page.04.

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