https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/79869716

This is filled with bad grammar. Page 4 has 14 errors alone.

Here's how page 4 should read.

"This story begins when my boyfriend and I went hiking on the cursed mountain. We had the bad luck of crossing the path of a sexually frustrated witch, who is probably a virgin.

The witch cast a curse on my boyfriend to make him ridiculously horny at random times. How this differs from normal is that if he doesn't cum, his body will keep producing cum until he dies from dehydration. She said all this before running off to the shops or something.

So, until the curse is broken, I need to keep my boyfriend satisfied so he'll stay alive."

Honestly, reading this in the current state is painful.

Base +6

i am sorry for my bad grammar, i still can't wrote english fluently. its all my fault cant hire a proofreader since my own english is bad. and force to finish the dialogue in 3 weeks.

lastly i am sorry for my awful english.

Base +4