A little rough poke-through on page 34 and you could stand to stretch some of the dialogue over an extra page, but otherwise really good work! I look forward to seeing more!

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I have a theory. Miss Carpenter once worked at the abandoned lab before becoming a teacher, which is why she deemed Emily's paper A grade material and encouraged her to keep researching rather than declaring it utter nonsense and failing Emily.

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