I've thought about uploading these here for a while but I haven't seen many caption albums [ other than Majelis's but she also draws her own art to fit the caption.] so i wasn't sure about the rules, but the website i normally upload these to removed some of my captions for arbitrary reasons.
[sorry if this gallery is against the rules or anything]

the captions are sorted from Oldest to Newest and the first three in the gallery were remade right before i uploaded this

What is the source on image 1?
Also you misspelled "size" in it.

You're missing some periods in image 2

I wish you wouldn't have photoshopped image 9 to blur it; it makes it hard to find a source for as well. It's also a bad edit.

Base +18, whateverthea -6

I don't know for sure but I don't think posting captioned works is against the rules. <https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Expunging#Forbidden>
There are a ton of other captioned galleries still around. It looks like adding additional censoring is against the rules but I don't know if that's actually something they take down galleries for... I've seen a lot of chinese translations that have a lot of extra censoring added to at least the cover page...

But if this is one of your first captioned gallery posts, based on what I've seen on other captioned galleries, unless it's high quality, well organized/separated by fetish, and contains a large quantity of images, it's going to get a very low rating and potentially be flamed in the comments.

Hopefully you can get suggestions for improvement somewhere better but some general things that improve captioned galleries are:
- Pleasant to read font, text size and color(s), emphasis (bold, italics, underline, *asterisks*, etc. Plain Black text on Bright White background is often jaring and unpleasant.
- Excellent writing - grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc.
- Ordered/grouped by fetish as well as possible with a general table of contents and/or description of contents in the first post.

And one of the things I personally want most in any assorted gallery is having the source of the art either in the file name or on the picture itself.

Good luck with your future captions.

Base +8, Kakuski +6, Qwertius +6, Void161 -4, whateverthea -6, Bunchalogs +8

Image 1 source is https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32591423/

also jbop thank you for the tips

Base +6, Christina Dick -9, Void161 -4, whateverthea +6